People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that students attend colleges as a matter of preparation for the market. They think that the knowledge acquired in the college will help the pupils for further usage at work and, also, they will be better qualified for the position. Others, however, state otherwise. It is thought that it is merely for being informed about one specific subject with no further usage. In my opinion, student participate in classes as a way to be qualified for work.
First of all, when one wants to apply for a job, he/she may have to present their curriculum. If he/she fits on the position, they will be interviewed. Finally, once they pass the interview process, thus they be given the job.
Moreover, others participate in graduate programs. They specialize in their field for further knowledge, which will help them much more than only attending an undergraduate course. Because the more knowledge one has, the more chances are to succeed later on in life.
Finally, as it is required for jobs, there has been an exponentially increase look for colleges and universities in different endeavors. Besides, for any job certificates are demanded from employees if they want to get employed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('exponentially') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02010050251 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73262432029 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653266331658 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7693183808 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206614704882 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723073337382 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862162404068 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122234857528 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805130632341 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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