People usually mix their private and professional life.What are the pros and cons

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People usually mix their private and professional life.What are the pros and cons

Some people believe that it is appropriate to stir up private and professional life together because they think that there is a connection between them. They say that one helps the another somehow. However, others agree that combining private and professional life has the tendency of messing everything up, hence we must split them up. In my opinion, there are pros and cons of mixing them.
First of all, when we bring private and professional up, we tend to talk over with our spouses about some inkling which may help us in the professional environment. They can auxiliate us to catch swift solutions to difficult problems. This leads towards the betterment of our professional lives and we become fathomable about the work environment issues.
However, it is unlike to bring to professional life our private issues. No one will be able to provide any help because no one knows what happens indeed in our private lives. It is up to ourselves to comprehend and discuss with our partners the strives happening in our lives.
Finally, bringing professional life into the private one may somewhat function, but the opposite not always may works. It will depend on the circumstances and moments to combining them together.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d moments to combining them together.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01470588235 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77318873142 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2031771343 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25485639291 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932264952574 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842281977838 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145249139209 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068433510101 0.0609392437508 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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