should library use digital gadgets to provide information on different topics pros and cons
The importance of digital gadgets to provide information was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked , the controversial over the potential influence in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my view points for both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to be logical conclusion.
There are myriad reasons of which will further elaborate of this arguments but one of the most proprederant one stems from the fact that is digital gadgets helpful nows day, The use digital gadgets such as computers, notepad and myriad applications on mobile phones can provide the students tremendous information and can saves a times and save a money. Besides, technology rises up day by day and one can easily access internet and gain knowledge regarding particular topics online in on time.Needless to say, all these merits are stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls negate this arguments and which can certainly overwhlem the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming ones is that some experts believe that the libraries should not provide the digital gadgets as it is a silent places to study with full concentration.Besides, using the digital gadgets can cause of several problems. The most of conspicuous one is, effects on eyesight. Hence it is apparent, why many against of this trend.
According to my views, one can reach the conclusion that the merits of digital gadgets overweight the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, regarding, so, thus, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18382352941 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89815590541 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.186614432 50.4703680194 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.0 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.33497536946 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203330112353 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665075074533 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803373679208 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122690147592 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395269972816 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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