Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer
I do agree that we can learn from hard situations lived in the past. These help us to fathom the world in the future.
First, let's suppose that we are starting our first job. At first, we are going to face many adversities due to the fact that everything is new to us and also, we are supposed to acquired as much knowledge as we can. Furthermore, if we change the job, everything acquired from the previous one will be helpful in the next job. Therefore, we will be keen to work for the next.
Second, there are many situations that were hard to be overcome and at the present we can take advantage of them to deal in other circunstamces. For instance, when I was young, I suffered of a mental malady. It was hard to deal with the ailment at first because I did not know what was happening to me. After a long period of treatement, I finally ditched from it. Then, nowadays, I know myself very well and I help others to get rid of this issue.
Moreover, when we are studying in highschool we face many drawbacks. For example, we are given many tests and exams during the study years. Also, we need to show our parents the report. It depends on our grades we may end up losing some benefits, for example we may not be allowed to play video games. However, once the situation is overcome we can be successful in the university in our further studies.
Finally, we always can take advantage of hard situations at first for further use in the future. In addition, the hard experiences will always help us in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37455830389 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49243633504 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530035335689 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8808061766 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7777777778 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115147861758 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044339698588 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341826485192 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789638320441 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318823970879 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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