All of us have faced one or the other difficult situation in our life. And, if we analyse these situations we will realize that each of these situations have taught us some valuable lessons for life. There may be many who argue that they do not have any lessons to learn from their experiences. However, according to me, from my personal experiences, I learned two main lessons from the difficult situations in my life - being strong and confident and always being optimistic.
I think, from my experiences, that the most important lesson that I learned from the difficult situations I had is becoming strong and confident with ourselves. For instance, when my daughter was diagnosed with some serious health problems, we all were shattered. It was as if everything was dark around us. However, after a few days I realized that I can't waste my life or my daughter's life by simply becoming sad. So, I had to become strong for my family and then make everyone realize that we all need to be strong and try to make my daughter healthy and strong.
The second main lesson I learned from experiences is that we need to be always optimistic and have faith in ourselves and God. And I strongly believe that being optimistic and thinking everything will be all right have a great part in making things right in our life. From my personal experience itself, we all, including my family and my in-laws, strongly believe that my daughter will become a healthy individual and we are on our path to success!
In conclusion, each difficult situation will be a stepping stone to a bright future . If we have the confidence and strong will power we will definitely overcome these hurdles in life. However, we should always ensure that we learn a lesson from these experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78360655738 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73353801459 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475409836066 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9822816737 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10116502484 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462092887903 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322009667446 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705841535355 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265235863862 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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