Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although technology has made communication easier, there are still as many misunderstandings among people as there were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
First and foremost, I think it is an important topic to discuss because it takes up a lot of room in our lives.
Some people argue the fact that technology has not had a negative impact at all, while others oppose this claim.
In my point of view, I would agree with the above-mentioned statement that even with the rapid of technology there is still a failure to understand people's points.
I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in greater detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, People in the past lived in isolated societies due to the lack of technological tools such as computers, mobile phones, the internet, and so on.
Therefore, no one can deny that technology gives people the opportunity to communicate easier with each other and allows them to share their ideas quicker.
However, with the rise of social media, people are reaching out more than they actually are, often discussing various issues, whether political, social, or otherwise, and sometimes accompanied by more bickering and personal feuds. In other words, the discussion about simple matters often turns into misunderstandings and deep disagreements between friends
So that the problems that occur during the dialogue on social network sites have become larger and deeper than those that occur in reality.
I believe that one of the main reasons for the misunderstanding that occurs on social media is the absence of body language.
Even though that the electronic expressions (emoji) contributed to some extent in showing some emotions and expressions, but in my opinion, they are not sufficient and cannot replace human emotions whether vocal or physical.
From what I have deliberated above, I reckon that technology has greatly helped in communicating with each other but on other hand, there are still some issues that should take into consideration when people use technology such as avoiding deep conversations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, so, still, while, i feel, i reckon, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18387096774 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91660893853 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2860947743 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.090909091 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 5.45110844103 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167633295259 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596198235605 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515796651322 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05887453607 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527366765197 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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