Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
A relation is built upon many factors or considerations . People look for considerations like honesty, understanding each other, love and loyalty in every relationship and for each person the importance of these factors may vary. Although all these factors are important in a relationship, I believe honesty is the most pivotal. For me, if a person is dishonest , I would not be able to deal with that person and would not like continue the relationship with him/her.
For a strong relationship to grow and keep up, it needs to have trust between people, be it in a friendship or marriage. If we come to know that the other person is not being truthful and is deceiving us, then we will loose confidence in them and every conversation will be looked upon with suspicion. I would not like to continue such a relationship. I can give an example from my life. During my teenage years, I had a very good friend with whom I used to share everything be it my feelings, my secrets, my happiness or my sorrows. But one day I came to know that she is telling others what I have confided in her. So I lost my confidence in her and hence I stopped telling her about my feelings or secrets.
Similarly, I give at most importance to telling truth in a marriage. Partners should be able to talk to each other about everything and be truthful. A single instance of dishonesty will bring cracks to the relationship. In such a relationship, people will not be happy and the relationship might even result in a separation. For example, one of my friends had a very serious affair before marriage but she did not want her husband to know about it and so she didn't tell to him about it. She was afraid her husband might end their relationship on knowing that. However, after few years, her husband came to know about it and he was very angry that she didn't tell him the truth. Their marriage is on the verge of a divorce. If she had told him the truth before marriage, this might not have been the case.
In conclusion, being truthful is a key factor in every relationship. Telling truth helps to built confidence between people and will also strengthen the relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58914728682 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81887596099 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467700258398 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3453070586 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184603906812 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648203884947 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534710996871 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134827940174 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378393660867 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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