Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
it is argued that saying the right is the most significant matter in any connection between people. In my opinion, I believe that the truth is the biggest topic for relationships, in particular of having trust and bringing happiness.
On the one hand, having a trust is, maybe, one of the most important values in building a strong relationship. trust is a belief in something without a question. Thanks to having this feature, one can trust to another person if there is a truth in the situation. For example, one asks to borrow money from someone close to use that money for an emergency. if that person who has money believes that he can get his money back and there is no doubt about this emergency, this creates trust in that relationship among two people and the outcome will be efficient for both of them. As a result, trusting someone comes from telling the truth words.
In addition to having trust, bringing happiness is another noteworthy reason. happiness is a feeling better yourself. Owing to having this, one can make happy another one by saying the truth. this happiness provides a good relationship between them. For instance, a girl and a man love each other for marriage. they should be honest themselves and do not say lies if they want to build a strong one. if they create such a beautiful connection, it brings out happiness. As a consequence, feeling better is necessary for the relationships if there are no lies in it.
In a nutshell, when all the specific reasons and relevant examples are considered and evaluated, it can be concluded that always telling the truth is the most valuable power in terms of having a trust and bringing happiness in any relationship between people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in particular, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80405405405 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74292494159 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516891891892 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6259504988 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6470588235 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16041676859 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545719819136 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668688215717 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129531934004 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680833685243 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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