Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay topics:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The stability of a relationship is sometimes the most beautiful achievement in one's life. HOWEVER, SOME PEOPLE have HAD DIFFERENT APPROACH TO CONTINUE THE relation SHIP BETEEM BY mixing true AND FALSE.i PERFER TO BE always truth TO THE POINT IN any relationship.i FEEL this WAY FOR TWO REASONS ,which will explore in the following easy .

First of all,believe in with each other is a most important things in any relation.If you do not trust the beloved person that may be your wife or girlfriend or your family member ,this will be a very tough to have a sweet relation.For example,In my family ,I am the youngesr person .but my mother always prefer to share or give responsibility to any kinds of financial business of the family rather than my ealder brother.this is because she know that my brother is not a trouthful person and there is a posibility to face an inappropriate condition to any business if she deal with him.since she have a believe that the truthfulness quality to myself,she have a great relationship with me rather then to my brother.

Secondly,truthfulness to a relation may sometimes carry benifate to any setuation which may not to be solved by telling a lie.There are many relation which face a dificulty even breakup only for a silly false.Whereas my relation keep going just for the truthfulness in the relation.For example,many teenager now a days use cell phone and social media and mony of then oftenengage in more then one fruad relation.The may have a best one but they often keep other to just have fun.What happen when her/his true love know about the fact.this create a large impact to the relation since they keep it in secrate.Thus ,the truthfullness in the relation is the most important to me.

In conclusion,I prefer the truth then mixing thruth and false in a ralation since it have a guarantee to have a sweet and permanent relation with joyful memories.

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The stability of a relationship is sometimes the most beaut...
^^
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...times the most beautiful achievement in ones life. HOWEVER, SOME PEOPLE have HAD DIF...
^^^^
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... truth TO THE POINT IN any relationship.i FEEL this WAY FOR TWO REASONS ,which wi...
^
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tionship.i FEEL this WAY FOR TWO REASONS ,which will explore in the following easy...
^^
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...which will explore in the following easy . First of all,believe in with ea...
^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , believe
...he following easy . First of all,believe in with each other is a most important ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...a most important things in any relation.If you do not trust the beloved person tha...
^^
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...wife or girlfriend or your family member ,this will be a very tough to have a swee...
^^
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...e a very tough to have a sweet relation.For example,In my family ,I am the youngesr...
^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...ugh to have a sweet relation.For example,In my family ,I am the youngesr person .bu...
^^^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... sweet relation.For example,In my family ,I am the youngesr person .but my mother ...
^^
Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e,In my family ,I am the youngesr person .but my mother always prefer to share or ...
^^
Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...n my ealder brother.this is because she know that my brother is not a trouthful pers...
^^^^
Line 7, column 575, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'deals'.
Suggestion: deals
...priate condition to any business if she deal with him.since she have a believe that ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 599, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...business if she deal with him.since she have a believe that the truthfulness quality...
^^^^
Line 7, column 604, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ess if she deal with him.since she have a believe that the truthfulness quality to myself...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 606, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...s if she deal with him.since she have a believe that the truthfulness quality to myself...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , she
... that the truthfulness quality to myself,she have a great relationship with me rathe...
^^^^
Line 7, column 658, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... the truthfulness quality to myself,she have a great relationship with me rather the...
^^^^
Line 7, column 699, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...ave a great relationship with me rather then to my brother. Secondly,truthfu...
^^^^
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , truthfulness
...her then to my brother. Secondly,truthfulness to a relation may sometimes carry benif...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...h may not to be solved by telling a lie.There are many relation which face a dificult...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 137, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun relation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many relations'.
Suggestion: many relations
...to be solved by telling a lie.There are many relation which face a dificulty even breakup onl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
...lty even breakup only for a silly false.Whereas my relation keep going just for the tru...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...st for the truthfulness in the relation.For example,many teenager now a days use ce...
^^^
Line 13, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...truthfulness in the relation.For example,many teenager now a days use cell phone and ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 309, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... the relation.For example,many teenager now a days use cell phone and social media and mon...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 389, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ia and mony of then oftenengage in more then one fruad relation.The may have a best ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 413, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...nengage in more then one fruad relation.The may have a best one but they often keep...
^^^
Line 13, column 421, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...in more then one fruad relation.The may have a best one but they often keep other to...
^^^^
Line 13, column 426, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...re then one fruad relation.The may have a best one but they often keep other to j...
^
Line 13, column 480, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: What
... they often keep other to just have fun.What happen when her/his true love know abou...
^^^^
Line 13, column 608, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... relation since they keep it in secrate.Thus ,the truthfullness in the relation is t...
^^^^
Line 13, column 612, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ation since they keep it in secrate.Thus ,the truthfullness in the relation is the...
^^
Line 23, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...tant to me. In conclusion,I prefer the truth then mixing thruth and...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91104294479 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0526832691 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546012269939 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.1344086022 323% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 264.533854166 48.9658058833 540% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.2 100.406767564 319% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.2 20.6045352989 316% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.2 5.45110844103 444% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159574955941 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089039741783 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365208123836 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973432565891 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460779191494 0.0645574589148 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 11.7677419355 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 58.1214874552 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 10.1575268817 282% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.0537634409 279% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.