In the present world, advertisements play a very important role in marketing. We can see a myriad of ways in which people use advertisement to promote and sell a product. Advertising companies do a great deal of market analysis before they introduce any product into market via advertisements. The content of advertisement varies from country to country and so I agree with the fact that the content of advertisements can tell us a lot about that country.
First, advertising helps us to know a lot about the economy and the needs of the majority of population in a country. For example, when I visited America, I was surprised to see that most of the commercials on TV was about medical equipment and medicines and also about insurance companies trying to encourage people to file lawsuits against companies to get compensation. On analysis, I understood that, in America, there is vast majority of old age people for whom these medicines and medical equipment are very important. However, in India, one will not notice these many commercials about medicines and medical equipment. In India, the advertisements are usually about cars and common household items like soap, detergents and others. This is because majority of population in India are common people.
Secondly, advertising reflects the economy of a country. No two countries are exactly and hence it is obviously meaningless to introduce the same products in two countries. The products introduced in a developed country is very different from that of an underdeveloped country. For instance, it will be quite meaningless to advertise about medical equipment or insurance companies in the under developed countries of Asia or Africa. Also, if many high tech facilities and travelling tips are advertised more frequently, then it means that the country's economy is very developed .
Finally, one can also understand the cultures and etiquette of a country by watching these commercials. Commercials always show people interacting with each other. It also come with meaningful messages on how to behave with others or what are considered inappropriate. Also, it our culture. For example, during Diwali, many new commercials are shown, depicting the importance of Diwali and many culture events associated with it like lighting the lamps, gifting each other, everyone coming together as a family and celebrating and many others. So watching these advertisements help us to obtain knowledge about the culture of a country.
In conclusion, content of advertisements change based on the country as advertisements are made after a lot of market analysis to suit to the needs of the majority of population in that country. Hence advertisements gives us a lot of information about the economy or culture of that particular country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2356.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2706935123 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13472657219 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478747203579 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5638905741 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.434782609 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4347826087 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194777575368 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627889943733 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576368847033 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124233821751 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584727595072 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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