Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
These days a lot of companies use a publication to attract more customers to sell their products. In my opinion, The advertisements can tell plenty of things about their host country. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, The companies and manufactories know deeply about their customer's necessities and fancies more than anyone. As a far as concerned, using commercial is the best way to know what products that country’s residents use mostly on a daily basis. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my experience. Two years ago, I decided to travel Brazil for my summer vacation and I didn’t know the life of Brazilians so I started to watch TV programmes of Brazilian channel which was helped a lot to understand what bulky things I could leave at my home and knew what they used widely. I obtained plenty of knowledge to understand their everyday life and basic needs, such as, in summer Brazil is so hot and shortage of humidity so I have to bring an umbrella and sun lotion mostly.
Secondly, it is a possible way to conjecture those countries’ economy and even locations more deeply. Drawing from my uncle’s experience, in last summer she was invited by her friend to visit in Russia and same as me at first she didn’t know about Russia but she acquired decent knowledge for just interested in the advertisement which was usually appeared during the TV programmes of this country’s channel. Interestingly she told me that most of the commercial illustrated these country’s local citizens didn’t live in good condition compared to other highly developed countries also she emphasized one example that most of the commodities are used in winter so she guessed it might be relatively cold even autumn and brought some warm clothes. As a result, Wikipedia proves this idea and she is happy about this experience.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that using publication it is highly possible to know about their host country. This is because you can know how their local inhabitants live and because it reveals to you how this country’s economy even their locations in the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9679144385 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98880732087 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532085561497 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9605507618 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.714285714 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126127536691 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519215475082 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499919668947 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980117587491 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534845997456 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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