Your office is full of plants and no one is watering them on regular basis. To whom this task should be assigned? Boss' s personal assistant or the whole team? Discuss.
My work place contains many different variety of plants, which are the features that are beautifying the room. Unfortunately, these plants have not been watering for a long time. In my point of view, this task should be performed by the whole people working in the office. I feel this way for several reasons, which I am going to outline in this following essay.
First of all, plants are directly benefit healthy lives for everyone. They absord carboncide and provide oxygen for a fresh and strong lung. Thus, everybody are all enjoying a good atmosphere, which can also positively impact on concentration as well as effective labor productivity. As a result, each individual is responsible for those enviromental creatures. They have to assign to take care of them every day so that these plants would live longer, and continue being an advantageous feature.
Secondly, it does not take too much time to water plants. Surely, it is a basic and effortless activity. Moreover, when getting weary, they could contemplate the green of these plants, which can erase anxiety, frustration or refresh themselves. Planting and caring trees could decrease the risk of suffering from depression and stress, according to some trustful evidences.
To sum up, I believe that watering plants should be accomplished by everyone. Plants have furnised lots of crucial stuff effecting on our health. Consequently, each person need to carefully and effectively look after them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
My work place contains many different variety of plants, which are the featur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i feel, as a result, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 236.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19915254237 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8447670652 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694915254237 0.524837075471 132% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.950936442 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6875 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163736335274 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504606702119 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566668085292 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982032205829 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051214678038 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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