Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, notwithstanding the era of up-to-date technology, there is a great deal of people who still fancy listening to the radio in search of news. Yet, others consider televisions to be the most effective way to acquire news. Personally, I would argue that radio is no longer the best news source thanks to dominant and innovative devices, such as TV.
On the one hand, there are some good grounds for arguing that radios still hold the most popular position among individuals even though we are living in a digital world. Firstly, since radio has been invented and existed long before the introduction of technological devices, countless senior citizens have developed a habit of receiving news through radio, and they do not want to change. Secondly, in terms of people who are not good at utilizing technology, or even cannot afford an expensive television, such as rural area, radio is their suitable selection to get access to new information on a regular and long-term basis.
On the other hand, television has been an universal preference for assembling news owing to the benefits it offers, especially city dwellers, as almost every household owns one or more televisions. The first thing is its vibrant features and beautiful pictures, unlike radio-cassette player. Consequently, residents can both listen to the newsreader and watch illustrations simultaneously, as well as have a closer look related to the events or issues they are observing. Furthermore, lots of televisions with contemporary functions and buttons, which can change and provide what viewers need in order to better watching. For instance, remote control for turning the volume up or down, cable tv for keeping the cable stable, and so on.
To sum up, I believe that people can definitely receive news faster and more convenient through t thanks to the constant advancement in technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ho are not good at utilizing technology, or even cannot afford an expensive telev...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... On the other hand, television has been an universal preference for assembling new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19078947368 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95972942491 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.762624558 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22841169777 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729493425637 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310563011567 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126665892388 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350183242786 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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