Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
These days, a lot of college students are still living with their parents, whilst others have transferred to another site in order to live alone and start studying in a different environment. both circumstances have benefits and unhelpfulness, therefore, I will outline in this following essay.
To begin with, notwithstanding they are old enough and eligible for not being reliant on others, university can stay with their families because of these two reasons. Firstly, parents will always accompany them in every hardship. It is significant when it comes to facing troubles, sadness or even despair, they can request for help and advice, since parents are principally mature and have undergone countless ups and downs of life. Secondly, mental and physical health are guaranteed as long as they are in comfort of their home. For instance, mother is doubtlessly good at cooking, and consequently, she will make wholesome diets and nutritious regimen on a regular basis, which are beneficial for her children's energy. Yet, somehow, owing to those comfortablenesses, students gradually become passive, lazy, dependent, as well as inconsistent in their own decisions in life. As a result, they will continue enjoying in the comfort zone without concerning about being self-made.
By contrast, those who are currently both acquiring knowledge at a higher education and living on their own are independent, well-experienced and self-disciplined. In fact, they have to take care completely of themselves, get access to self-study, as well as strive to make a living. Accordingly, life skills such as housekeeping skill, social skill, cognitive skill will be enhanced, which would bring them a solidary in their upcoming future. Nevertheless, as no one is beside them when it comes to undergoing difficulties, they easily suffer from being collapsed by high pressure, which is likely to lead to depression. Moreover, while filling with sorrow or broken-heartedness, all they can do is to stand and overcome these unendurable feelings strongly, since there is no advisor or listener near them.
In conclusion, either staying with parents in a cozy house, or going to a strange place to study and live, have advantages and helplessness for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37960339943 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19251767496 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631728045326 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4423320572 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9333333333 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204670796418 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612864934056 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680860394118 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126740078711 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449086495156 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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