Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
It is true that many youngsters can stay at their hometowns to study university while the others have to travel to other cities to pursue higher education after graduating from high school. There are advantages and disadvantages of both these situations.
If university students are able to live with their families, there are both merits and drawbacks. Firstly, one major advantage is that they are able to economize because they do not have to pay for accommodation. Secondly, they enjoy family support in terms of meal, home entertainments, washing machine… However, this situation may has disadvantages. Living in home means they have to study under supervision then it is more difficult to take part in social activities to master vital skills. For instance, some students were prohibited to go out after dinner and cannot participate in those events without the acceptance from their parents.
Regarding to living away from home, there are obviously some advantages. The most significant benefit is that they can live independently and achieve necessary skills. With less support from home, they learn to do all household works from cooking, washing to fixing electronic devices. Some students are even do a lot of part-time jobs to bear the cost of living and tuition fees. These factors will help to enhance their CV when they seek for a job in the future. By contrast, unlike the one who can stay with family, they have to face with the high cost of accommodation and have limited opportunities to enjoy family reunions.
In conclusion, while there will clearly be differences in the personal circumstances of individual university students, some advantages and disadvantages of living at home or away from home are identified.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19858156028 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92769531013 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5382783879 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404789177252 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136724285233 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11189050213 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254728774451 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472361339764 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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