An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
These days, purchasing goods online appears to be a popularity in this up-to-day world for people and companies. In this following essay, I will outline the merits and demerits of this trend.
To begin with, years ago, without technological developments, individuals used to go on foot for kilometers to buy items. Yet, today, by means of fast and convenient delivery service, residents can order effortlessly what they want on the internet, and a few minutes later, merchandise would be shipped directly to their house. this improvement allows everyone to go shopping while being in the comfort of their zone. Similarly, regarding business, both employees and manager fill themselves with work on a regular and long-term basis, therefore, shopping online is the best selection. Additionally, shopping online websites occasionally sell things with much cheaper and more affordable prices, especially in the sale, compared to supermarkets or malls.
Nevertheless, this tendency also has a negative aspect, which harm shoppers and manufacture industry. To be more specific, counterfeits with awful qualities, brands and materials are increasingly becoming rampant, as well as being traded on the internet, with the purpose of tricking to get money more. By contrast, it is difficult to realize fake items, since individuals cannot look closely at the real articles on the internet. As a result, the ones who sustain the consequences are the online buyers even though they have no idea and intention to support this illegal work. In addition, apropos other brands which are faked up, once purchasers discover, their reputations and prestiges would be affected badly, as well as be boycotted.
In conclusion, shopping online has simultaneously helpfulnesses and drawbacks with aforementioned outlines
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54347826087 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07455664295 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3240218979 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152600607749 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487189580306 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350038206602 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884136245195 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043486342626 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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