You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)
Dear Ashley,
I am Hoang's cousin. I heard that you are his best friend in London, United Kingdom. Hence, I am writing this letter to you to request several help from you. Hope you will be willing and we can make acquaintances of each other. On the same occasion, thank you so much for being a good and lovely friend to my cousin.
Next week, I am going to visit london city with my family. This year 2019, my whole family has worked and learn assiduously. Thus, my father came to decision that he would enjoy his summer vacation in london with his family, which is world-famous as a gorgeous and appealing city. This is our first trip to abroad, therefore, we are thrilled, overjoyed, as well as a little perplexed, because we do not know much about UK. Accordingly, I want to ask some questions related to london, as I am really looking forward to being in person in london. First of all, what is the weather like there? I have searched and learnt that all the places of your country are filling with the sunlight of summer. that is obviously a nice moment to take a visit to there. Yet, I still have no idea about the costume to dress in order to be suitable with the weather and the local people. Plus, there are variety of landmarks, scenic scenery and recreational places, which my family and I cannot deliberate where is worth paying attention most. Consequently, could you recommend and bring out some mentions for us? In addition to that, I also would love to select an affordable, beautiful and large accommodation for four individuals. And, if you do not mind, would you introduce and show my family well-known specialities and delicious dishes?
Many thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will be our open-hearted and zealous tour guide, as well as my adorable friend. Give my best regards to your family and wish you have a nice day ahead. Please send me your next response.
Cheers,
Hafween
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
15 Cao Ba Quat Street, Ho Chi Minh city, Vietnam. Dear Ashle...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t Street, Ho Chi Minh city, Vietnam. Dear Ashley, I am Hoangs cousin. I hea...
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Suggestion:
... Chi Minh city, Vietnam. Dear Ashley, I am Hoangs cousin. I heard that you are...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun help seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some help'.
Suggestion: some help
...m writing this letter to you to request several help from you. Hope you will be willing and ...
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Suggestion:
...to ask some questions related to london, as I am really looking forward to being ...
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Suggestion: That
...re filling with the sunlight of summer. that is obviously a nice moment to take a vi...
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Suggestion:
... the weather and the local people. Plus, there are variety of landmarks, scenic s...
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Suggestion:
...me mentions for us? In addition to that, I also would love to select an affordabl...
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Suggestion:
...nown specialities and delicious dishes? Many thanks for reading my letter. I hop...
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Suggestion:
...se send me your next response. Cheers, Hafween
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, first, hence, if, look, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59598853868 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55280759695 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616045845272 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.201777138 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7391304348 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1739130435 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262296898177 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660845978593 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644744349243 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12349447377 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111722025247 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.