In most successful organizations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, others said that other factors are more important. Give your opinion?
many people reckon effective communication between managers and subordinate employees is the most important feature of an organization's success. Nevertheless, there are other contributing factors to an organization's success that might be more important. I'm going to discuss both sides of this argument in this essay.
On the one hand, a company is in reality a group of different individuals with dissimilar personalities and priorities, therefore, seamless and effective interactions between leaders and employees in an organization are needed for their mutual understanding. Consequently, comprehension of each other significantly contributes to solidary, which is advantageous for both managers and their subordinates and results in the company running as the managers want it to be run.
On the contrary, there are many others factors that contribute to a firm's success, some of which could be considered more important than efficiently communication. one of the contributing factors is uniform coordination. The workers and their managers have to definite clearly what their goals are, what their expectations are, etc. Afterwards, they need to work on it together harder. Another factor leading to victory is the competency. they must contain good qualities such as: responsibility, patience, seriousness, etc. An enterprise could have the best managers in the word but if there is not a skilled and reliable work force, and vice versa, progress will be slow and victory difficult to come by. I believe that these elements are more relevant to success than communication between managers and workers itself.
To sum up, communication between leaders and employees plays an important and active part in an organization's success. but, for the most part, its success depends on other elements in order that communication to be more effective, for instance, competent managers and excellent workers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60899653979 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30823354534 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546712802768 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8718631746 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303967122827 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996533724243 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096449062906 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189240098855 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710437152219 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.