Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society.
To what extent do you agree?
In the present-day world, as the dominant technological innovations are developing, the quality of life has been improved thereby. Specifically speaking, the existence of social media has had a massive influence on people in the society. Many individuals think that social networking sites are harmful for people, especially children, on a regular basis, while some would argue that they are positive developments with regard of mental life. From my point of view, social media is both beneficial and disadvantageous, and therefore I disagree with the upmentioned idea, as well as I am going to fully outline in this following essay.
To begin with, social networks offer lots of helpfulnesses in almost every professions. Similar to internet, which is an useful educational material, much as it contains a great number of documents, books, journals, social networking also updates and provides learners countless online courses, lessons or captivating learning sources. Moreover, for those who have just undergone a tiring and assiduous day at the workplaces, online social networks hereby play an significant selection in order to escape from their daily life, which may help them relieve stress and mentally healthier. They do online activities such as chatting, watching movies, or even share their actual actions in real life with their friends from disparate places.
Nevertheless, with respect to the social networking interaction of youngsters, it has had brought unhelpfulnesses to their life. These days, teenagers are inclined to live in a unreal world on networks, which means they fancy filling themselves with video games, unfounded gossips and fake news. Accordingly, they suffer from social networks addiction, and neglect, as well as are less concentrating on their own studies and the good things in their existence. For instance, since Facebook is the world's biggest social networking site, there is a great deal of people in society has been distanced from one another because of the lack of face-to-face meeting.
To conclude, with the widespread appearances of networks, I strongly believe that it has both brought negative issues and benefits for the individuals and society, especially regarding young generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...improved thereby. Specifically speaking, the existence of social media has had a ...
^^
Line 1, column 583, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee with the upmentioned idea, as well as I am going to fully outline in this foll...
^^
Line 1, column 638, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fully outline in this following essay. To begin with, social networks offer lo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... every professions. Similar to internet, which is an useful educational material,...
^^
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...essions. Similar to internet, which is an useful educational material, much as it...
^^
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ces, online social networks hereby play an significant selection in order to escap...
^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...days, teenagers are inclined to live in a unreal world on networks, which means t...
^
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nded gossips and fake news. Accordingly, they suffer from social networks addicti...
^^
Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the biggest'.
Suggestion: worlds the biggest
...ce. For instance, since Facebook is the worlds biggest social networking site, there is a grea...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51304347826 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9937553154 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4437085637 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.307692308 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206805338982 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074491489288 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518023088146 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129245736433 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306377327089 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.