In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules?
In this present-day world, in some countries children have to obey regulations and rules seriously apropos of deeds in order to be well-behaved, whilst in other nations they are free to do whatever they want. Personally, I strongly believe that their behaviors should not be confined in rules and adults should let children satisfactorily and comfortably do what they desire.
On the one hand, I agree that strict rules and laws towards right and acceptable actions can effectively educate children themselves, especially juveniles. Through learning and getting access to regulations, they have a opportunity with a view to training morals, values, as well as better disciplines on top of good ideology. For stance, there is a rule for Vietnamese kids that they have to be deferential and respectful to elderly people. this beautiful action has both taught and spreaded nationwide that old people are priority and they deserve to receive honor, as well as esteem. Therefore, not only Vietnamese children, but also adults are all nice and kind to the senior. Undeniably, as severe laws has influenced greatly on young generations, youngsters would become more obedient and hearfelt with regard to themselves and everybody, as well as behave sincerely.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the benefits of regulations concerning human behaviors, young individuals should freely do what they love. In many countries, outdated laws have still remained for thousands of decades, hence, youths have been coerced into complying with in accordance with parents and the elderly. Otherwise, they will be judged and considered indocile and stubborn. China is a typical example of this negative issue. many years ago, when feudal regime was existing, women have no rights in life, accordingly, they had suffered from countless disadvantages because the only thing they could do was housework. Yet, in this modern era, there is a great deal of old folks still believe that women were born to manage housework and housekeeping. Consequently, lots of Chinese girls are compelled to leave school at the early age so as to stay at home and accomplish housework. Undoubtlessly, this kind of regulations are affected badly to children's mind and awareness.
All in all, for those aforementioned reasons, I believe that youngsters also have their rights to make decisions and happily do what they like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, as to, kind of, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30606860158 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96303601585 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598944591029 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.200586309 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.294117647 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365353194675 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994440689945 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906152184423 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230435923057 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109083985317 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.