Health experts claim that walking is one of the best ways to keep good health, but less and less people walking in daily life. What are the reason and how to encourage people to walk more?
According to health specialists, walking is a good activity, which can provide people energy for assiduous days and help them to stay in shape better. Notwithstanding this, these days not many individuals do this on a regular and long-term basis. I am going to discuss several reasons behind this phenomenon and simultaneously suggest some ways to tackle this issue.
To begin with, as we know, walking is much slower and more energetic compared to driving automobiles or motorbikes. Additionally, it is also time-consuming since walking has to be spent a lot of time to get to the determined place we want. Therefore, as people do not desire to invest time for going on foot, they select fast and convenient means of transport, which would allow them to transfer quickly and to save time. Another reason is by virtue of pedlars and other vehicles. To be more specific, pedestrian paths and street sides have been invaded by goods stalls and car parking, as those sites frequently get crowded. As a result, countless residents might find it difficult walking without any interruptions, barriers or barricades.
From my point of view, there is a number of encouragement for folks to pay more attention to this kind of activity. Firstly, the government should establish movements and campaigns so that all citizens could join, have fun, as well as stay healthy together. Besides, as walking also plays a crucial role in protecting environment and prevent environmental problems, propagating individuals, including schoolchildren, is a great manner for castigating people's awareness and behaviours apropos of the surrounding environment.
In conclusion, as residents are not deeply into going for a walk on account of direct and indirect reasons, I believe strongly that upmentioned suggestion could make a different with a view to appealing to walk more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23825503356 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11475201332 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667785234899 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6848666806 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222221069557 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677684248455 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521278413439 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125016929161 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02124026123 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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