Some people use the internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a Positive or negative development?
Give your own opinion and examples from your own experience.
These days, due to the dominant technological innovations and developments in society, people tend to rely on them more than ever. Utilizing technology in daily life leads to both positive and negative outcomes. One of the worst improvements is individuals depend on approaches and therapies to cure their diseases. I feel this way for several reasons, which will be outlined in this following essay.
First and foremost, besides useful information that internet has offered, some trustless unfoundednesses have been existed since internet was a good source to get access to surrounded people. The illegal people would attract who are sick badly with the improper and artificial tablets, toxic medicines as well as remiss therapeutics. Hence, following those remedies for medical issues is perilous and risky, as they would lose a colossal amount of money for bad intentions, and excruciating symptoms are all what they receive after that.
Secondly, hospitals are the trustworthy place where best doctors are assembled with the mission is taking care of residents, help them to prevent as well as to treat medically unexpected sickness they are suffering from. For instance, I have a friend named Rose who was weak and weavy because of asthma. She used to be in and out the hospital lots of times. As she was seduced into many advertisements on the internet, which are said to prescribe a more effective and better treatment under the condition that she had to invest approximately 100 us dollars for it, Rose still put her faith in the therapy and doses at the hospital. Soon, she overcame the illness owing to her compliance of the process.
In summarize, every man should get to trustful clinics in order to be guaranteed about living a healthy life. Do not care about false tricks on internet, as you may become frail and lose all money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, for instance, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03921568627 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79702673161 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1524014535 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133164133565 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378951463945 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236110630095 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685080217356 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323246257227 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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