Some countries are not popular with using a bicycle even though it is benificial for tham. why?
What are the possible solutions to envourage people to use more of bicycle as the main transport?
These days, some countries are not used to utilizing bicycles. they tend to travel by cars, taxis or motorcycles. The reasons of this affair will be outlined, as well as the methods for people transferring bicycle more often will be discussed in this following essay.
To begin with, there are several causes leading to the lack of employing bicycle, which is friendly for the enviroment surrounding. Firstly, people prefer transportations which allow them to move faster, to contain belongings on the way, as well as to fasten modern facilities serving their requirements about the convenience while travelling. For instance, the speed of an automobile is swift, notwithstanding the costly fuel. Additionally, it also has a massive space for filling with bags, boxes, toys and other materials, and air-condition with extraordinary cassette or technological devices are installed. All those usefulness are guaranteed to benefit people on the journey. Secondly, a lot of people would say that bicycles are time-consuming, as they need to ride effortfully in order to make it move. specifically speaking, employees ans other workers do not suit to go cycling, as their targets are exacted to be in person on time.
On the other hand, these upmentioned reasons are just inappreciable. Despite this, there are still some main solutions to appeal to each individual to go by bicycles. First of all, appearances of big transports on the road can cause traffic jam, the crowding chaos, as well as environmental problems. Consequently, using bicycles is the best selection to avoid those issues. secondly, lots of trustworthy scientific evidences has proved that people who go cycling every day are more sporty, healthy and live longer, due to the advantages bicycles offers. Hence, moving on the street by bicycles is not the bad choice for both improving health and protecting enviroment.
In conclusion, even though travelling by cars, trains or motorbikes seem to increasingly become popular in some countries, they all have drawbacks and unhelpfulness. Thus, bicycles are the essential options for everyone. People need to use them in order to conquer a beneficial habits, as well as to prevent themselves from toxic atmosphere
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32294617564 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11050480649 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623229461756 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6109019145 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8947368421 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94736842105 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311671527881 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796088667817 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518076184427 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180511984372 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235875022372 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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