The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future?.
These days, people's workplaces are constantly changing and evolving to meet the demands of modern society. Furthermore, the roles and responsibilities of jobs are undergoing changes to adapt to new ways of working and settling down. This essay will discuss the possible reasons for those changes, and suggest some ways that people can better prepare for their future career paths.
The rapid changes in the world of work has disrupted many traditional industries leading to the loss of many occupations. Personally there are two main causes of this affair. Firstly, owing to increasing globalization and technological developments in hi-tech machines and artificial intelligence, millions of people all around the world are losing their jobs and being replaced by automated processes. For instance, millions of factory workers have lost their jobs because machine that are able to accomplish the tasks quicker and more effectively. Secondly, with the complete domination of technological innovations, customers' demands are rising for more complicated and precious products as well as services. Consequently, companies require better work performance regarding productivity and effectiveness from their employees to satisfy customers.
Nevertheless, there are a number of good preparations that people can equip for themselves in order to keep peace with the rapidly changing world of work. First of all, students preparing to graduate from high schools and workers need to broaden their horizons. They have to keep learning and training socialable skills. That is the only way to guarantee their solid future. Moreover, among modern technology, many jobs are simply incorporating technology into their process, and therefore people will be able to keep up to date with these rapid changes. To help achieve this, some specific courses could be designed to help educate people in their world of work
In conclusion, due to advanced machinery and highly growing demands, career orientation cannot stay unchanged and remain passive. In order to tackle this issue, the best way is to always better educate people to carefully choose their jobs, and to keep developing themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54654654655 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93732380141 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8340192845 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4375 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316711649091 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951641851541 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834214286655 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194577816097 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103713620157 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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