Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city. Which do you prefer ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
These days, choosing an ideal place to live with family is now becoming common for anyone who wants to get married and start a family. Some people reckon that countryside is an exhilarating shelter, while others would live in an urban area because it is modern and captivating. Personally, I fancy big city more than rural area. I feel this way and my specific and meticulous reasons will be outlined in this following essay.
First of all, big city contains domination of technological innovations in every professions, especially in medical field and education. For instance, as elderly people tend to suffer from different diseases relating to their old age, compelling medical equipment can cure and prevent those health-damaging diseases, as well as help them to live longer. At school, children have more chances to get access to chemical experiments and others modern educational materials in curriculum. As a result, they will understand more and easily broaden their horizons.
Secondly, there are variety of occupations for everyone to make money or to develop themselves. In fact, a lot of companies, firms, enterprises need employees to work and there is no worry if you have lost your job since you could work on a job anywhere you adore.
Thirdly, lots of gorgeous scenery and landmarks are almost located in big cities. Consequently, tourism increasingly become well-known to attract tourists from all over the world. Furthermore, needs of recreation is necessary when you are weary with work. you can get there to enjoy and erase all troubles easily.
In summarize, owing to three main upmentioned reasons, I am of opinion that big city has offered more advantages than rural area does. specifically, it has revolutionised the beneficial and effortless way to acquire knowledge, view scenic places and access medical technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, i feel, in fact, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95799629645 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670033670034 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5130494672 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147296600624 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396509105114 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035283875766 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711753498746 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381474105519 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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