Introduce about your hometown

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Introduce about your hometown

my home town is in the continent of asia, it's located in the south of viet nam, called, ho chi minh city.
The climate in viet nam is tropical, so the environment here is hot, no snow on winter, summer and spring is even hotter, that is the south, the north is colder due to the temperate region is located in the north, but it is still not cold enough to make snow,but summer and spring is the opposite, it is colder .ho chi minh city is the second most biggest tourist destination of viet nam, right after Ha Noi [I think so]. so be sure to visit my home town!

!!!!!!happy new year!!!!!!!!
oh also,
happy tet everyone !
[it is a Vietnamese tradition every year, if you were wondering]

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