Essay topics:
governments should support people who have no homes.
do agree or disagree?
it is absolutely a yes , who disagree isn't thinking about others, try thinking that you are the homeless person and the government doesn't care about you, not even finding a way to make your life better, then you keep sleeping on the street, sometimes people even beat you up, the governor ignores your needs and sometimes make it worse. please! think about them you can't just go against them, please,help me, and make the world a better place.you can start simply by donating to charity, your money can offer them shelter, your old clothes give them clothes, the food you donation gives them food, if all of us had done this there will never be poverty.
thanks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is absolutely a yes , who disagree isnt...
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Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
it is absolutely a yes , who disagree isnt thinking about others...
^^
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
it is absolutely a yes , who disagree isnt thinking about others, try thinking tha...
^^^^
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... the homeless person and the government doesnt care about you, not even finding a way ...
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Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es people even beat you up, the governor ignores your needs and sometimes make it...
^^
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...your needs and sometimes make it worse. please! think about them you cant just go agai...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Think
...ds and sometimes make it worse. please! think about them you cant just go against the...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... it worse. please! think about them you cant just go against them, please,help me, a...
^^^^
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , help
...em you cant just go against them, please,help me, and make the world a better place.y...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
...one this there will never be poverty. thanks.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 546.0 1615.20841683 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 117.0 315.596192385 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 4.20363070211 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20567026711 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.760683760684 0.561755894193 135% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 506.74238477 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 10.5 49.4020404114 21% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 273.0 106.682146367 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.5 20.7667163134 282% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.047900146884 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417952314089 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417952314089 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480215515972 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.53 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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