Argument Essay"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year , fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year.And yet the percentage of positive reviews about specific Super Screen movies have

The argument claims that despite , the good quality of movie , fewer people attended super screen -produced movies than in any other year .So Super screen should allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
The argument is based on the assumption is that the quality of movie is goos which is not clear to me . If the argument can show a solid evidence against this assumption , this will make it stronger .

There is no evidence that how was the quality of the movie in any other year . no clearification of how much budget, they used for super screen movie in any other year .I think , they did not spend much money in promoting movie than previous year . So , how they reached a decision , only to spend a greater share in adevrtising can increase public awarness.

Moreover, If they spend a greater share to only in advertisiement , then they must to sacrifice the quality of movie which is the main part to arise the awarness in public .

A bad quality movie can not attract people to engage . Cause , people are not so much stupid to waste their valuable time .

The percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific movie increased , but a maker never made a movie for specific community . He wants to be appreciated by each and everybody and wants to dissipate his idea through movie to all. So , appreciation from few people can not be an assurance that the quality of movie is good . For example, the quality and plot , the way of potraying make bound people to watch and to engage in everyway . Though , titanic is a english movie , bt many people who can not understand watch this movie for many times. , Maker was not too much concern about plot and quality and the way to convey the idea to people . Thus , people , bound to review about this movie . In the era of technology , it is not tough for people to reach the information. They have so many information to select which they want to watch or not . So , spending a greater amount in advertising can not be a prime source of rising public awareness.
In conclusion , a good quality , plot , interesting way to convey idea can make the people bound towatch this movie and to make positive review.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 389.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68894601542 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53039468039 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437017994859 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3636441622 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 45.0 5.25449101796 856% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310686313108 0.218282227539 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100552694284 0.0743258471296 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104802321931 0.0701772020484 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156623657869 0.128457276422 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121124731717 0.0628817314937 193% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.5979740519 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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