The passege states that the Prunty country is trying to improve highway safety by limiting the speed in highway but yet the authority fails because drivers are not obeying the speed limit. Then it suggests to follow Butler Country as they manage to reduce accident over 25 percent without limiting speed. For this they took a project like increasing linr widths, resurfacing rough highways and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Though it look like well, some factors are not quit impressive at all.
At first we learn that Prunty country just limited the speed limit from 55 to 45. This weakens the argument as there might be other reasons that causing accident. There might a lot wild animals who shows in the road frequently as well as they are using phone while they are driving. There might other reasons behinds like the drivers are less likely to follow traffic rules or their are no road dividers between two ways or they often fell sleep. those point are weakening this argument because just limiting the speed, those problems can't be solved.
Then, the authors suggested to follow the butlen country to reduce the accident rate as they they reduced accident 25 percent. But, those kind of measurement might not help to reduce accident in prunty country because geographically those two country might not same such as one might flat surface highway other might hilly highway or one highway might through the forest while other is along desert. On those cases it is common scenes that the reasons for accident are widely different. So, those things are not helping to reduce the accident.
Another thing that vague, why the prunty country only limited the speed limit and why they didn't took other stratigies to improve highway safety. There is also not clear about actual number of accident in butler country. there might be actually more accident happens in there then prunty city.
At the end, if we knew there are same type of people , road, highway system in those two country we might say that with those implication we might improve highway safety in prunty country, but under those condition stated above which might cause accident ,there is no way that those implication will help the prunty city at all.
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- not OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 379 350
No. of Characters: 1826 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.412 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.818 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.187 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.267 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.473 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.368 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.593 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests following'.
Suggestion: suggests following
...re not obeying the speed limit. Then it suggests to follow Butler Country as they manage to reduce...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
...y at dangerous intersections. Though it look like well, some factors are not quit im...
^^^^
Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... less likely to follow traffic rules or their are no road dividers between two ways o...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... dividers between two ways or they often fell sleep. those point are weakening th...
^^
Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Those
...een two ways or they often fell sleep. those point are weakening this argument becau...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 536, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...just limiting the speed, those problems cant be solved. Then, the authors suggested...
^^^^
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested following'.
Suggestion: suggested following
...lems cant be solved. Then, the authors suggested to follow the butlen country to reduce the accide...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
... country to reduce the accident rate as they they reduced accident 25 percent. But, those...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
... they reduced accident 25 percent. But, those kind of measurement might not help to reduce...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ly limited the speed limit and why they didnt took other stratigies to improve highwa...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...l number of accident in butler country. there might be actually more accident happens...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...if we knew there are same type of people , road, highway system in those two count...
^^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this implication' or 'those implications'?
Suggestion: this implication; those implications
...hose two country we might say that with those implication we might improve highway safety in prun...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... stated above which might cause accident ,there is no way that those implication w...
^^
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this implication' or 'those implications'?
Suggestion: this implication; those implications
...ht cause accident ,there is no way that those implication will help the prunty city at all.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re is no way that those implication will help the prunty city at all.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, so, then, well, while, another thing, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 378.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92328042328 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22206828374 2.78398813304 80% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505291005291 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9722649388 57.8364921388 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.470588235 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.70786347227 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 6.88822355289 174% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168885218734 0.218282227539 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663107503891 0.0743258471296 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563468996861 0.0701772020484 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114947183364 0.128457276422 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445490627954 0.0628817314937 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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