In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patrol, many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago: increasing lane widths, resurfacing rough highways, and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today, major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.
It seems axiomatic that applying thorough road improvement project toward the road of prunty county improve highway safety. To justify this argument, the author cites that the project which have done in butler county lower the number of accidents. While supporting the argument, however, the author makes several assumptions that cannot be taken for granted. therefore, evidences regarding these assumptions are needed in order to assess the argument properly.
As a threshold matter, the argument hastily assumes that all the survey held are totally reliable. however, this might be the case, it is possible that the survey have some statistical errors that seems to be correct. since the examination was held by the highway patrol, it is possible that only few of people are driving with exceeded speed limit, but the patrol perceived as many people when they drive much more than ordinary people in prunty county. Also, the survey can have some errors regarding the amount of data that have gathered. if the examination have held relatively short length of time, than the examination might not reliable. Moreover, the situations of prunty county of last year might be a extraordinary circumstances, such as some alcohol festivals are held around the county. thus, evidences that ensures the reliability of the survey held are crucial to assess the argument properly. if the survey are not reliable, then the argument is remain vulnerable.
Even conceding that the survey held are totally reliable, the author of the argument relies on an unfair assumption: that the declination of the number of accidents in butler Country was stemmed from the road improvement project. Although this might be the case, it is totally possible that the reduction of accidents was caused by other factors than the project, such as sharing ride policy or change of insurance policy. perhaps, a new service regarding the sharing ride such as Uber or Tada might have launched in the region of butler county. Probably, many people are afraid of riding their cars because of the raised insurance fees. In respect of these circumstances, the declination of accidents in butler county might not have stemmed from the project they done. thus, evidences regarding that direct relationship between two events is present should be provided.
Finally, the author unfairly posits that the environment surrounding two counties are identical. however, it is totally possible that the circumstances of prunty county are dissimilar to that of butler county. perhaps, many accidents that have occurred in prunty county were originated from the occasional heavy rain, which inundate the roads significantly, or heavy snow, which makes the road more slippery. In this regard, the project would not likely to lead results that have expected. therefore, evidences that ensures the natural environment of two counties are identical or similar should be proposed.
In sum, since numerous assumptions are applied to the argument, it remains fragile in its form. therefore, evidences mentioned above should be provided in order to assess the argument precisely and accurately.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 497 350
No. of Characters: 2575 1500
No. of Different Words: 211 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.722 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.181 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.589 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 215 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 145 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 98 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 38.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.69 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.406 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.66 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...tions that cannot be taken for granted. therefore, evidences regarding these assumptions ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to assess the argument properly. As a threshold matter, the argument hast...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...l the survey held are totally reliable. however, this might be the case, it is possible...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...stical errors that seems to be correct. since the examination was held by the highway...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 543, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... the amount of data that have gathered. if the examination have held relatively sh...
^^
Line 9, column 605, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...e held relatively short length of time, than the examination might not reliable. Mor...
^^^^
Line 9, column 710, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of prunty county of last year might be a extraordinary circumstances, such as so...
^
Line 9, column 800, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...l festivals are held around the county. thus, evidences that ensures the reliability...
^^^^
Line 9, column 909, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...rucial to assess the argument properly. if the survey are not reliable, then the a...
^^
Line 9, column 962, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
... are not reliable, then the argument is remain vulnerable. Even conceding ...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the argument is remain vulnerable. Even conceding that the survey held are ...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 424, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Perhaps
...e policy or change of insurance policy. perhaps, a new service regarding the sharing ri...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 771, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...ave stemmed from the project they done. thus, evidences regarding that direct relati...
^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts is present should be provided. Finally, the author unfairly posits that...
^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...surrounding two counties are identical. however, it is totally possible that the circum...
^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Perhaps
...re dissimilar to that of butler county. perhaps, many accidents that have occurred in p...
^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 491, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ely to lead results that have expected. therefore, evidences that ensures the natural env...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cal or similar should be proposed. In sum, since numerous assumptions are a...
^^^^^^^
Line 33, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...gument, it remains fragile in its form. therefore, evidences mentioned above should be pr...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 13.6137724551 169% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2688.0 2260.96107784 119% => OK
No of words: 497.0 441.139720559 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40845070423 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69447978049 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 204.123752495 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440643863179 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 840.6 705.55239521 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1372507237 57.8364921388 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.52 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.88 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.70786347227 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159025768879 0.218282227539 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448075877614 0.0743258471296 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507738421192 0.0701772020484 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919193951142 0.128457276422 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468098741038 0.0628817314937 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 98.500998004 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.