Balmer
The author is talking about the balmer islands where this use mopeds as major form of transportation and populations visit the place around 100000 in summer season.In the next point,he's saying that to reduce the accidents mopeds and pedestrians should be rented limitedly 50 per a day to 25 per day which is the decision taken by the Town council of Balamer islands.And he suggested that limiting of rentals,the council attains 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that achived last year on other island called seavilles which their council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.But the author's statement is surrounded by ceratin important loopholes which are not discussed above in the statement.
Firstly,the author is talking about the accidents when population in summer is increased to 100000 but he didnt take the consideration that all the population who are visting the island only rents the Mopends as transportation and also there is no particular evidence thatshows all the population only rents mopeds.The other point mentioned by author is that,Reducing the rentals of mopeds by 25 per day from 50 per day gives the balmer council less income as they reduced from double to single.There is no data which excatly shows the accidents are not causing when the council reduced the count of rentals to 25 per day.
Secondly,author mentioned that the 50 percent of accidents are reduced in the other island called seaville when they implemented such rule of rental reduction,but the author clearly failed to give the count of population who visits the seaville island in particular during the summer.Maybe in the population who visits the seaville island is less during the summers and high during other seasons.As the author did not mention the exact data about the population in seaville island,this maybe the reason of accidents reduced 50 percent last year.
Hence,the points discussed above could have taken to consideration while making the statement by author.The points given by author about reduction of accidents in the balmer island are clearly assumptions with comparison to seaville islands which may be having other reasons for the reduction of accidents.
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1819 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.97 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.529 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 52.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 30.098 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.501 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.746 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...he place around 100000 in summer season.In the next point,hes saying that to reduc...
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Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hes
...00000 in summer season.In the next point,hes saying that to reduce the accidents mop...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...0000 in summer season.In the next point,hes saying that to reduce the accidents mop...
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Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... by the Town council of Balamer islands.And he suggested that limiting of rentals,...
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Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of Balamer islands.And he suggested that limiting of rentals,the council attains ...
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Line 1, column 409, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , the
...d he suggested that limiting of rentals,the council attains 50 percent annual reduc...
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Line 1, column 594, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: But
...nforced similar limits on moped rentals.But the authors statement is surrounded by ...
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Line 1, column 602, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...similar limits on moped rentals.But the authors statement is surrounded by ceratin impo...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , the
...ussed above in the statement. Firstly,the author is talking about the accidents w...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...in summer is increased to 100000 but he didnt take the consideration that all the pop...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...e consideration that all the population who are visting the island only rents the Mopen...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: The
...ws all the population only rents mopeds.The other point mentioned by author is that...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , Reducing
... other point mentioned by author is that,Reducing the rentals of mopeds by 25 per day fro...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: There
...e as they reduced from double to single.There is no data which excatly shows the acci...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , author
...nt of rentals to 25 per day. Secondly,author mentioned that the 50 percent of accide...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , but
...mplemented such rule of rental reduction,but the author clearly failed to give the c...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Maybe
... island in particular during the summer.Maybe in the population who visits the seavil...
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Suggestion: As
...e summers and high during other seasons.As the author did not mention the exact da...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , this
... about the population in seaville island,this maybe the reason of accidents reduced 5...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , the
...s reduced 50 percent last year. Hence,the points discussed above could have taken...
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Suggestion: The
...on while making the statement by author.The points given by author about reduction ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, may, second, secondly, so, while, in particular, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 350.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28285714286 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85025025754 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 87.0 22.8473053892 381% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.500830562 57.8364921388 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 462.25 119.503703932 387% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 87.5 23.324526521 375% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.70786347227 420% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.25449101796 400% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0722197136667 0.218282227539 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571763047971 0.0743258471296 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366337366235 0.0701772020484 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571763047971 0.128457276422 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366337366235 0.0628817314937 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.2 14.3799401198 328% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.83 48.3550499002 -35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.2 12.197005988 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.53 12.5979740519 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.43 8.32208582834 137% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 12.3882235529 436% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.8 11.1389221557 330% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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