"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25
per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
The author's argument state's on Balmer Island accidents are increasing especially during summer. Accidents occur due to augment of mopeds and pedestrians, which is flawed. Major source of transportation is mopeds, by reducing such transportation increased population in summer will face the transportation problem but not accidents decrease. Authors provides any evidences to those assumption, then argument will be strengthen.
Firstly, on balmer Island mopeds are major source of transportation. Due to increase in accidents, town council take's a decision as to decrease half of mopeds which is first flaw in argument. Because, author doesn't provide any necessary evidence's to such statement. For example, town council reduces the mopeds then there should alternate resources to travel. But, accidents doesn't depends not only reducing mopeds to half but also various factors include in town like no traffic controls or civilisation in people.
Moreover argument states, in summer population increases to 100000 so chances of increasing accidents may high, which is too flaw. Increase in population leads to usage of public transportation but not their own mopeds and cause accidents. For increased population balmer town council should provide public usage and revenue generated from these should be utilised for improvement of preclude accidents. Such important actions should be take to control the accidents and should develop their plans accordingly. Arguments can be strengthen by providing data related to increased population and proportionate accidents then argument can be strengthen.
Author argument states, by reducing mopeds from 50 to 25 will reduce accidents which happens in neighbouring island of Seaville. In seaville factors may vary according to their conditions. By using only such reduced accidents statistics cannot be implemented in balmer island. Actions of seaville in balmer may not be result's as positive due to varying factors in both separate entity's. Consider various terms like seaville may have different area, population, well established public transport which doesn't stated in argument. Using those terms and analysing them, then those rules can be implemented in balmer.
The statement, reducing mopeds to half of it will result's in reducing half accidents can be strengthen by proving necessary assumptions such as, various use of public transpiration, well setup of protocol to follow, summer special usage of various resource. These results can be strengthen the author's argument.
The argument could be strengthened if the author provided information reading various considered term by analysing its purposes, Argument could be further strengthened if the author were to define key terms as well as establish a link between mopeds and population increased in summer. As it stands, however, the author argument is flawed for the reason indicated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
The authors argument states on Balmer Island accide...
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Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this assumption' or 'those assumptions'?
Suggestion: this assumption; those assumptions
...ease. Authors provides any evidences to those assumption, then argument will be strengthen. F...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mopeds which is first flaw in argument. Because, author doesnt provide any necessary ev...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...first flaw in argument. Because, author doesnt provide any necessary evidences to such...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...ate resources to travel. But, accidents doesnt depends not only reducing mopeds to hal...
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...nds not only reducing mopeds to half but also various factors include in town lik...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... controls or civilisation in people. Moreover argument states, in summer population i...
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Message: Did you mean 'to flaw'?
Suggestion: to flaw
...increasing accidents may high, which is too flaw. Increase in population leads to usage ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'flawed'.
Suggestion: flawed
...easing accidents may high, which is too flaw. Increase in population leads to usage ...
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Message: Did you mean 'taken'?
Suggestion: taken
...dents. Such important actions should be take to control the accidents and should dev...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accidents'' or 'accident's'?
Suggestion: accidents'; accident's
... conditions. By using only such reduced accidents statistics cannot be implemented in bal...
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Suggestion:
...Actions of seaville in balmer may not be results as positive due to varying facto...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...well established public transport which doesnt stated in argument. Using those terms a...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...ent, reducing mopeds to half of it will results in reducing half accidents can be stre...
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Suggestion:
...half of it will results in reducing half accidents can be strengthen by proving n...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ce. These results can be strengthen the authors argument. The argument could be stre...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation reading various considered term by analysing its purposes, Argument could b...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.305613305613 0.25644967241 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.185031185031 0.15541462614 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0686070686071 0.0836205057962 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.049896049896 0.0520304965353 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.014553014553 0.0272364105082 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114345114345 0.125424944231 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0727650727651 0.0416121511921 175% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.265247944 2.79052419416 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.035343035343 0.026700313972 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.045738045738 0.113004496875 40% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.043659043659 0.0255425247493 171% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010395010395 0.0127820249294 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2904.0 2731.13054187 106% => OK
No of words: 432.0 446.07635468 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.72222222222 6.12365571057 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.497685185185 0.378187486979 132% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.388888888889 0.287650121315 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.268518518519 0.208842608468 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1875 0.135150697306 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.265247944 2.79052419416 117% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 207.018472906 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460648148148 0.469332199767 98% => OK
Word variations: 50.4831826544 52.1807786196 97% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.039408867 120% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.2022227129 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0854382963 57.7814097925 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 141.986410481 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.2022227129 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.724660767414 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 3.58251231527 475% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.8888888889 51.9672348444 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.975 1.8405768891 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391331945754 0.441005458295 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0987528857309 0.135418324435 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0667631231707 0.0829849096947 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.513752136969 0.58762219726 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152237201827 0.147661913831 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141554042378 0.193483328276 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768671608032 0.0970749176394 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.301181969804 0.42659136922 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0557026358167 0.0774707102158 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262505806283 0.312017818177 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692547290315 0.0698173142475 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.33743842365 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.87684729064 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.82512315271 104% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 13.0 5.36822660099 242% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.82389162562 142% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 14.657635468 157% => OK
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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