Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion
Internet is the most powerful weapon which can be also mentioned as comparatively positive thing happened in our everyday life. Like a two side of a coin, it is true that internet has some negative impact. But which portion of the internet weighs more is needed to be understand logically.
Firstly, if we think about the world without internet that would be hard to imagine. Because we are now highly dependent on it. Internet has enabled the world to come closer. If education sector is considered, it can be noticeable that online classes, tons of explanation videos of study materials which are available on internet have made the learning system easier than before. If anyone wish to learn programming, history, mathematics, science etc, he doesn’t need to appear physically in a class. All he needs to do is that to find these on internet without even spending any penny. So, that is the magic thing internet has made these positive things happened which are most likely to be impossible without internet.
Second, internet has brought a revolutionary change in communication system. We now don’t need to convey our messages through letter which are time consuming, in general, takes somedays to let the receiver get the information. But modern communication mediums like e-mail, facebook, whatsapp, viber ensured to send a text within a second to its’ receiver. Besides, internet has also brought some fast positive changes in our entertainment. Live movie streaming, audios and videos on youtube made our entertainment sources come to close in a more easier way.
There are some drawbacks of internet like adult content , cyber bullying, information leaking etc which are not supposed to be have great amount of negative impact at all. Therefore, the prevalence use of internet has created the most positive impact in our life.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wishes'.
Suggestion: wishes
...ng system easier than before. If anyone wish to learn programming, history, mathemat...
^^^^
Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to program', 'to programme'.
Suggestion: to program; to programme
...er than before. If anyone wish to learn programming, history, mathematics, science etc, he ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ternet without even spending any penny. So, that is the magic thing internet has made th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
...sured to send a text within a second to its’ receiver. Besides, internet has also br...
^^^^
Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ntertainment sources come to close in a more easier way. There are some drawbacks of inter...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...drawbacks of internet like adult content , cyber bullying, information leaking etc...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, in general, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 301.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13289036545 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7981699866 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7263286809 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8823529412 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 23.324526521 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139684420938 0.218282227539 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534694501904 0.0743258471296 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599433578438 0.0701772020484 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09514065623 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376880701398 0.0628817314937 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wishes'.
Suggestion: wishes
...ng system easier than before. If anyone wish to learn programming, history, mathemat...
^^^^
Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to program', 'to programme'.
Suggestion: to program; to programme
...er than before. If anyone wish to learn programming, history, mathematics, science etc, he ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ternet without even spending any penny. So, that is the magic thing internet has made th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
...sured to send a text within a second to its’ receiver. Besides, internet has also br...
^^^^
Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ntertainment sources come to close in a more easier way. There are some drawbacks of inter...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...drawbacks of internet like adult content , cyber bullying, information leaking etc...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, in general, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 301.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13289036545 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7981699866 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7263286809 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8823529412 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 23.324526521 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139684420938 0.218282227539 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534694501904 0.0743258471296 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599433578438 0.0701772020484 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09514065623 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376880701398 0.0628817314937 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.