The following appeared in a memo to the board of directors of a company that specializes in the delivery of heating oil. "Most homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last heating season, that region experienced 90 days with below-normal temperatures, and climate forecasters predict that this weather pattern will continue for several more years. Furthermore, many new homes are being built in the region in response to recent population growth. Because of these trends, we can safely predict that this region will experience an increased demand for heating oil during the next five years." Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The conclusion said in the argument that "In last heating season, that region experienced 90 days with below-normal temperature, and climate forecasters predict that this weather patterns will continue for several more years, also said that new more homes are being built in the region also." According to me, several more few things that must be specified to predict accurate demand for heating oil in next five years.
Firstly, author said that in heating season, northeastern united states experienced 90 days below-normal temperature. Surveyor must have to specify that how much lower temperature surveyed? If it's much lower than normal temperature then residents necessarily required oil for heating, but if not, then there is no need for heating, because 2 to 3 degrees lower temperature doesn't feel more colder that peoples need heating in all that. So author have to indicate proper number of how much degrees lower temperature surveyed.
Secondly, also climate forecasters predicted that this weather pattern will continue for several more years, how much? If company have to forecast their sales for oil, they needed information of this weather system will continue for 5 or 10 years or a particular rigid number for how much years. otherwise if the this cold weather system will last for just 2 more years, and company planned for 5 years production already, then company will required to store produced oil as produced on prediction, also required to store at proper place where fire vulnerability is much lower otherwise company will have big loss.
Furthermore, author did not provide exact percent or number of how much new houses are being built in this region. More accurate information is necessary for forecasters to predict company's future production. If there are going to built more then fifty percent of houses in that particular region, then prediction will change against just ten percent of increase in number of houses in northeastern united states. As more new houses are being built, company will increase their production, and required proper number or percentage of increasing houses.
The author's contention that oil producing company can safely predict that demand of heating oil for next five year is needed some more accurate and rigid numbers such that increasing houses in that region, measured lower temperature then previous year and that cold weather will continue for how much years. This information required for accurate prediction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ore homes are being built in the region also.' According to me, several more fe...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture then residents necessarily required oil for heating, but if not, then there ...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ecause 2 to 3 degrees lower temperature doesnt feel more colder that peoples need heat...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'colder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: colder
...3 degrees lower temperature doesnt feel more colder that peoples need heating in all that. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...r have to indicate proper number of how much degrees lower temperature surveyed. ...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...rs or a particular rigid number for how much years. otherwise if the this cold weath...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Otherwise
...icular rigid number for how much years. otherwise if the this cold weather system will la...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: otherwise,
...icular rigid number for how much years. otherwise if the this cold weather system will la...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...number for how much years. otherwise if the this cold weather system will last for just ...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'require' or 'be required'?
Suggestion: require; be required
...s production already, then company will required to store produced oil as produced on pr...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...uture production. If there are going to built more then fifty percent of houses in t...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ction. If there are going to built more then fifty percent of houses in that partic...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oing to built more then fifty percent of houses in that particular region, then p...
^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...percentage of increasing houses. The authors contention that oil producing company c...
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Line 9, column 297, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...that cold weather will continue for how much years. This information required for ac...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248275862069 0.25644967241 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.158620689655 0.15541462614 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.142528735632 0.0836205057962 170% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0574712643678 0.0520304965353 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0114942528736 0.0272364105082 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126436781609 0.125424944231 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0551724137931 0.0416121511921 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66636007424 2.79052419416 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0229885057471 0.026700313972 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0459770114943 0.113004496875 41% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0275862068966 0.0255425247493 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0206896551724 0.0127820249294 162% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2497.0 2731.13054187 91% => OK
No of words: 395.0 446.07635468 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32151898734 6.12365571057 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.415189873418 0.378187486979 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311392405063 0.287650121315 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194936708861 0.208842608468 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118987341772 0.135150697306 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66636007424 2.79052419416 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 207.018472906 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435443037975 0.469332199767 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.921282813 52.1807786196 88% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.039408867 70% => OK
Sentence length: 28.2142857143 23.2022227129 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 106.983786679 57.7814097925 185% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.357142857 141.986410481 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2142857143 23.2022227129 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.724660767414 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 3.58251231527 419% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 59.3535262206 51.9672348444 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.88888888889 1.8405768891 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330886851808 0.441005458295 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161525836612 0.135418324435 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.11730638751 0.0829849096947 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.625992622706 0.58762219726 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.212682682102 0.147661913831 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126974236119 0.193483328276 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800556324879 0.0970749176394 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.243752649593 0.42659136922 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0342507591496 0.0774707102158 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213083640969 0.312017818177 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468585236842 0.0698173142475 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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