The following appeared in a newsletter offering advice to investors:
“Techcorporation is our top pick for investment this term. We urge all of our clients to invest in this new company. For the first time in ten years, a company that has developed satellite technology has been approved by the FTA to compete with the current satellite provider. That company is Techcorporation. A consumer survey last year indicated that over eighty percent of respondents were dissatisfied with the current satellite television provider and would want to switch to another provider if the industry were not a monopoly. Thus, the new venture of Techcorporation into satellite television will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the advice and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the advice.
In the given argument, Newsletter advice to investor to invest in the New Technocorporation , reason given as they are FTA approved and very profitable. IF i get the answers of below three questions investors will think about the investment in the company or not.
Firstly, The newsletter said that, The company is Techcorporation and we should invest. They had done some survey and say that the eighty percent of respondent are dissatisfied with the given service provider. But they now clear that how many number of people the had include in the survey or what is the survey size? also where and when they taken survey. They are not explain anything with respect to the number of people
Secondly, they said that, they want the new service provider but not exactly said that, they want Techcorporation. If market had number of service provider are available they has options which service provider they want to choose. because of this we dont have any idea about how we say that , they prefer our service rather than establish service provider.
Thirdly, Newsletter author said that investor get high profit if they invest in the Techcorporation. But they are not given any statistics about how they get profit and how much profit they get also with this in how many days they get this profit.
If they give us answered on asked above question, them it will be easy to investor to decide to invest or not.
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Comments
e-rater score report
No. of Words: 243 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 243 350
No. of Characters: 1137 1500
No. of Different Words: 119 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.948 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.679 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.53 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 48 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.073 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.818 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.691 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r to invest in the New Technocorporation , reason given as they are FTA approved a...
^^
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re FTA approved and very profitable. IF i get the answers of below three question...
^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the investment in the company or not. Firstly, The newsletter said that, The c...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...e provider. But they now clear that how many number of people the had include in the survey...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
... that how many number of people the had include in the survey or what is the survey siz...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
... that how many number of people the had include in the survey or what is the survey siz...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... the survey or what is the survey size? also where and when they taken survey. They ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
... the survey or what is the survey size? also where and when they taken survey. They ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'took'?
Suggestion: took
...e survey size? also where and when they taken survey. They are not explain anything w...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 381, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'explained'.
Suggestion: explained
...nd when they taken survey. They are not explain anything with respect to the number of ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g with respect to the number of people Secondly, they said that, they want the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y said that, they want Techcorporation. If market had number of service provider a...
^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...number of service provider are available they has options which service provider ...
^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...of service provider are available they has options which service provider they wan...
^^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...h service provider they want to choose. because of this we dont have any idea about how...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...they want to choose. because of this we dont have any idea about how we say that , t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dont have any idea about how we say that , they prefer our service rather than est...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ather than establish service provider. Thirdly, Newsletter author said that inv...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n how many days they get this profit. If they give us answered on asked above ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 55.5748502994 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 2260.96107784 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 441.139720559 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81893004115 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6296739987 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 204.123752495 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489711934156 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 705.55239521 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8236421003 57.8364921388 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5833333333 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.70786347227 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128700653856 0.218282227539 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682931543924 0.0743258471296 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697889023577 0.0701772020484 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872497615704 0.128457276422 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458361738956 0.0628817314937 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 98.500998004 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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