The following appeared in a newspaper article about law firms in the city of Megalopolis. "In Megalopolis, the number of law school graduates who went to work for larger, corporate firms declined by 15% over the last three years, whereas an increasing num

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The following appeared in a newspaper article about law firms in the city of Megalopolis.

"In Megalopolis, the number of law school graduates who went to work for larger, corporate firms declined by 15% over the last three years, whereas an increasing number of graduates took jobs at small, general practice firms. Even though large firms usually offer much higher salaries, law school graduates are choosing to work for the smaller firms most likely because they experience greater job satisfaction at smaller firms. In a survey of first-year students in a leading law school, most agreed with the statement that earning a high salary was less important to them than job satisfaction. This finding suggests that the large, corporate firms of Megalopolis will need to offer graduates more benefits and incentives and reduce the number of hours they must work."

Write a response in which you examine the stated or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions & what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

The editorial of this argument recommends that the large, corporate firms of Megalopolis should offer law graduates more benefits and incentives and reducing the work hours in order to attract law graduates into their organizations. To support this claim the editorial points out the following facts regarding the law graduates and the current status in their enrollment onto large corporate firms: (1) there is a 15% decline of the number of law graduates working for the large corporate firms for the successive three years, (2) law graduates prioritize job satisfaction than salary and find greater job satisfaction at smaller firms and hence prefer working for the smaller firms in spite of the higher salaries offered by the large corporate firms. Close scrutiny of those facts however reveals that none of them lend credible support to this recommendation and this argument is therefore unpersuasive as it stands.

To begin with, a 15% decline of the number of law graduates working for the large corporate firms for the successive three years doesn’t necessarily indicate that this decline results primarily from the lack of interest of law graduates working for the large firms. However, it is entirely possible that during the recent years all large firms are fully occupied with their employees and there are fewer job openings in those corporations for a new employee to enroll. If this is the case, the 15% decline results from the lack of availability of slots in these large firms not from the lack of interests of law graduates working for them. In that case offering law graduates more benefits and incentives and reducing the work hours have nothing to do with the inciting their interests towards the large firms.

Secondly, even if assuming that job satisfaction is the first priority for the law graduates, yet it provides no credible support that law graduates prefer smaller firms because of better job satisfaction in these firms. Perhaps, the large corporate firms want employees who have a prior job experience which makes large corporate firms unattractive to fresh law graduates who have no prior job experience and instead they prefer smaller firms which require no job experience. If this is the case, an increasing number of law graduates in smaller firms results from the lack of competence of the law graduates which precludes them from enrolling onto large corporate firms not for the better job satisfaction provided by the smaller firms. In that case, the large firms might have equal or better job satisfactory environment than the smaller firms and offering the law graduates a better incentives & benefits will serve no purpose for those firms.

The argument also assumes unfairly that offering better incentives and benefits and reducing the working hours is the only way to promote job satisfaction among the employees and doing so will help the large firms to attract large numbers of law graduates. In fact, there could be other underlying factors which constitute a better a job satisfaction. Perhaps, young law graduates face tremendous interference on their works from their respective senior employees in large firms which makes them unhappy. In that case offering a lucrative incentive and reducing working hours is not a viable mean of promoting job satisfaction.

For additional support the editorial points out the result of a survey which demonstrates a great predilection of the first year law students at a leading law school to job satisfaction. It is not clear, however, the scope and validity of that survey. For example, the sample may not have been representative of all law schools, asking only those students who are from a rich family, which may have swayed students toward job satisfaction. However, it is also not clear that the preferences of those students will match to the preferences of the law graduates who are seeking for a job. It is also possible that the preferences of those students might change when they graduate. Unless the survey is fully representative, valid, and reliable, it cannot be used to effectively back the editorial’s argument.

In sum, the argument is logically flawed and therefore unconvincing as it stands. To bolster it the editorial might provide clearer evidence that the recent decline in large firms results from the lack of interests among the law graduates who prefer job satisfaction and there is no other possible reason for this decline. The editorial should incorporate more samples by surveying the students from the other law schools to ensure that sample effectively represents preference of the law graduates. To better evaluate the argument it would show clearly that there is no other possible way to change the situation in large firms and only offering the graduates more benefits and incentives and reduce the number of hours will make the law students who prefer job satisfaction taking jobs in large firms in greater numbers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...jobs in large firms in greater numbers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in fact', 'in spite of', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275981524249 0.25644967241 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.136258660508 0.15541462614 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108545034642 0.0836205057962 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0415704387991 0.0520304965353 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0254041570439 0.0272364105082 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125866050808 0.125424944231 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0392609699769 0.0416121511921 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80027012726 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0184757505774 0.026700313972 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00230946882217 0.001811407834 127% => OK
Determiners: 0.127020785219 0.113004496875 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0161662817552 0.0255425247493 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0173210161663 0.0127820249294 136% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4968.0 2731.13054187 182% => OK
No of words: 806.0 446.07635468 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16377171216 6.12365571057 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.32823977812 4.57801047555 116% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359801488834 0.378187486979 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289081885856 0.287650121315 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217121588089 0.208842608468 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143920595533 0.135150697306 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80027012726 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 207.018472906 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.338709677419 0.469332199767 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.6290592912 52.1807786196 86% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.039408867 125% => OK
Sentence length: 32.24 23.2022227129 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.3198685939 57.7814097925 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.72 141.986410481 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.24 23.2022227129 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.724660767414 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.58251231527 56% => OK
Readability: 61.1481885856 51.9672348444 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.17045454545 1.8405768891 118% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528661311577 0.441005458295 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.168996863882 0.135418324435 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107360945146 0.0829849096947 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.625408093461 0.58762219726 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166160292104 0.147661913831 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.245498625309 0.193483328276 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132584233019 0.0970749176394 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.544155386714 0.42659136922 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121082265748 0.0774707102158 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.396534727437 0.312017818177 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087766176727 0.0698173142475 126% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.33743842365 180% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 6.46551724138 201% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 14.657635468 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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