The following appeared as part of an article in a business magazine.
"A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising executives according to the average number of hours they sleep per night showed an association between the amount of sleep the executives need and the success of their firms. Of the advertising firms studied, those whose executives reported needing no more than 6 hours of sleep per night had higher profit margins and faster growth. These results suggest that if a business wants to prosper, it should hire only people who need less than 6 hours of sleep per night."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The author of the argument purportedly highlights that in order to run a successful business companies should hire employees who need less than 6 hour of sleep per night. However, the premises upon which he puts his claim are fallacious.
First, the author contends that a recent study on 300 male and female executives shows that there is a correlation between sleep hours and firms' success. However, it does not lend credence to the argument since there is possibility that this study has not been reliable. As a matter of fact, this recent study just show the result of 300 people with different sex and indeed, every human being has its own specific character. In fact, there might be majorities of executives who use to sleep more than 6 hours while they are leading successful business even more than those 300 people. It is also important to say that maybe their success in business is because of extreme efforts and their own skills. In fact, being talent or skilled play a key role in running and keeping a successful business.
The author also attributes that those companies that their executives need less than 6 hours sleep had higher income and rapid growth. However, it might seems tenable at face, it has some detects. One of the main, if not the only, problem with the premise is that profit and success of any firms depend on variety of items such as economic situation, qualities of products and so forth. Actually, the profit and growth might be due to the higher quality of firms' products that can lead to vast majorities of consumers and finally a hoard of money. Alongside that, maybe recover from economic recession provide an opportunity for firms to have higher profit and improvement.
Finally, as set forth but the author in order to run a successful business companies should hire those people who need less than 6 hours of sleep. Nevertheless, the rationale behind this premise could be challenged owing to the fact that many people sleep less than 6 hours but they are not talent and smart enough to patronize firms lead a prosper business. Another point that should not go unnoticed is that perhaps people take a nap while they are working because they sleep less than 6 hours and scientists have suggested that every human being need at least 8 hours of sleep.
Having scrutinized the premises, a logical conclusion that can be drawn is that the author has ignored the number of assumption that presence of which could strengthen the author claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'company'?
Suggestion: company
...t in order to run a successful business companies should hire employees who need less tha...
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Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...uld hire employees who need less than 6 hour of sleep per night. However, the premis...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e might be majorities of executives who use to sleep more than 6 hours while they a...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'company'?
Suggestion: company
...r in order to run a successful business companies should hire those people who need less ...
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Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nd smart enough to patronize firms lead a prosper business. Another point that should not...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich could strengthen the author claim.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'at least', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244588744589 0.25644967241 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.147186147186 0.15541462614 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0930735930736 0.0836205057962 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0541125541126 0.0520304965353 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030303030303 0.0272364105082 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138528138528 0.125424944231 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0367965367965 0.0416121511921 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47022070846 2.79052419416 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021645021645 0.026700313972 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.113004496875 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.021645021645 0.0255425247493 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194805194805 0.0127820249294 152% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2495.0 2731.13054187 91% => OK
No of words: 428.0 446.07635468 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82943925234 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317757009346 0.378187486979 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224299065421 0.287650121315 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154205607477 0.208842608468 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105140186916 0.135150697306 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47022070846 2.79052419416 89% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 207.018472906 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483644859813 0.469332199767 103% => OK
Word variations: 53.5130844725 52.1807786196 103% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.039408867 85% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1764705882 23.2022227129 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3760276941 57.7814097925 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.764705882 141.986410481 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1764705882 23.2022227129 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.724660767414 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.58251231527 167% => OK
Readability: 47.6063771303 51.9672348444 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.81308411215 1.8405768891 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408894770349 0.441005458295 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105136925252 0.135418324435 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0892471876443 0.0829849096947 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.54350853878 0.58762219726 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191725092002 0.147661913831 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16051119781 0.193483328276 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846793732751 0.0970749176394 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.300569247158 0.42659136922 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0690295648331 0.0774707102158 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272560805221 0.312017818177 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351426310878 0.0698173142475 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.33743842365 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 6.46551724138 170% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 14.657635468 109% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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