The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any ot

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...produced movies than in any other year. thus, the roble lies not with the quality of...
^^^^
Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Super
...t movies of good quality are available. super screen should therefore allocate a grea...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...aching the public through advertising. however,super screen should therefore allocate ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , super
...the public through advertising. however,super screen should therefore allocate a grea...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...aching the public through advertising. firstly,According to a recent report from our m...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , According
...the public through advertising. firstly,According to a recent report from our marketing d...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...-produced movies than in any other year.i dis agree with this statement and they ...
^
Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...statement and they have failed to built an movie super screen-produced movies with...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...reen-produced movies with in any year. secondly,And yet the percentage of positive revi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , And
...duced movies with in any year. secondly,And yet the percentage of positive reviews ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Clearly
...ctually increased during the past year. clearly, the contents of these reviews are not ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hing enough of our prospective viewers. .i dis agree with this statement and they...
^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing enough of our prospective viewers. .i dis agree with this statement and they ...
^
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... with this statement and they have less no of the percentage of positive reviews ...
^^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this statement and they have less no of the percentage of positive reviews by mo...
^^
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Clearly
...ctually increased during the past year. clearly, the contents of these reviews are not ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...ot reaching enough of our prospective. finally, thus, the roble lies not with the qual...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Super
...t movies of good quality are available. super screen should therefore allocate a grea...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eaching the public through advertising. .i dis agree with this statement and the ...
^
Line 6, column 271, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...aching the public through advertising. .i dis agree with this statement and the r...
^
Line 6, column 439, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Super
...t movies of good quality are available. super screen should therefore allocate a grea...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , According
...ic through advertising. In conculsion,According to a recent report from our marketing d...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 175, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...duced movies than in any other year.yes i agree with this statement and the recen...
^
Line 8, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , during
...ent report from our marketing department,during the past year, have more people attende...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, therefore, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 55.5748502994 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 373.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3672922252 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98451754594 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 204.123752495 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.276139410188 0.468620217663 59% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1831989579 57.8364921388 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.466666667 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.70786347227 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.25449101796 457% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.527763543044 0.218282227539 242% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233399080873 0.0743258471296 314% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.22577467917 0.0701772020484 322% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370176816412 0.128457276422 288% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217195461642 0.0628817314937 345% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.32208582834 82% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 1951 1500
No. of Different Words: 100 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.161 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.639 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 63 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.465 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.679 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.74 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.358 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5