As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Yes
...th in the short span of time. In fact,Yes I agree with statement because the tech...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , apple
...e technology is used such as google maps,apple maps,hire maps. However,No I dis agr...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hire
...y is used such as google maps,apple maps,hire maps. However,No I dis agree with th...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , No
...le maps,apple maps,hire maps. However,No I dis agree with the statement because ...
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Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: meanwhile
...or example:If a student having exams in mean while of exams he/she are playing exams and w...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ing exams in mean while of exams he/she are playing exams and watching movies in yo...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun marks is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... gets disturbed and they will get score less marks in the exams. Where as, Yes I ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...l get score less marks in the exams. Where as, Yes I agree with the statement because...
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Line 11, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , instagram
... social networking apps such as Facebook,instagram,whatsapp,snapchat,twitter. For examp...
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Line 11, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , snapchat
...apps such as Facebook,instagram,whatsapp,snapchat,twitter. For example:- if a person w...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...oup chats to communicate each other. Thus the statement states that the technolog...
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Line 15, column 284, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'place'
Suggestion: place
...n of time.in future the technology will places a major key and more and more impact to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 274.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06569343066 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70700888313 2.79657885939 133% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448905109489 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7425738934 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.5 118.986275619 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 23.4991977007 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42673034256 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218902291328 0.0831039109588 263% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.221439926188 0.0758088955206 292% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218902291328 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221439926188 0.0667264976115 332% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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