An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
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Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The initiative taken by the international development organization(IDO) is good and commendable. But, there are various factors that need to be considered to make this initiative a success.
One of the factor is the claim made by IDO that its new breed of millet will be readily adopted by people as it is the staple diet. To make that happen, one must consider that taste of the new breed of millet and compare it with the original one. If the taste is drastically different and is not liked by people, there are likely chances that people will stop using the new product. It must be ensured by IDO that the taste of new breed is better or at the least comparable with the original one.
Another factor is the cost involved in producing these new millet. It is mentioned that the new breed seeds are expensive and subsidies are given to farmers to buy these seeds. Are there subsidies good enough? Is the cost of the seed after subsidizing at the least equal or lesser that the cost of the original seed? The nation of Tagus is impoverish and it is likely that farmers will buy the seeds that are more cheaper. Thus, IDO must ensure that the cost of the seed after subsidies is lesser than that of original seeds.
It has been mentioned that the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet. To make this happen, the government but be stable willing to help. We are at this point unsure of the political situation in Tagus. If the situation is dire, it is likely that the government have more bigger problems to resolve before promoting the new millet. If the government of Tagus is stable, IDO must maintain good relationship with the gevernment and must ask its help in promoting the new breed of millet.
One of the assumption made in the argument is that the primary source of vitamin A in Tagus is through millet. There can be some other sources which provide vitamin A and are more cheaper than the new breed of millet. If that is the case, the market of Tagus will not adopt the new breed of millet and would prefer the other sources. IDO must ensure that they have exhausted other cheaper sources of vitamin A before going ahead with the plan of promoting new breed of millet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... consider that taste of the new breed of millet and compare it with the original ...
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'impoverished'.
Suggestion: impoverished
...e original seed? The nation of Tagus is impoverish and it is likely that farmers will buy ...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...hat farmers will buy the seeds that are more cheaper. Thus, IDO must ensure that the cost of...
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
..., it is likely that the government have more bigger problems to resolve before promoting th...
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Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...sources which provide vitamin A and are more cheaper than the new breed of millet. If that i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22247706422 0.25644967241 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.172018348624 0.15541462614 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114678899083 0.0836205057962 137% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0206422018349 0.0520304965353 40% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0298165137615 0.0272364105082 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149082568807 0.125424944231 119% => OK
Participles: 0.045871559633 0.0416121511921 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42969974259 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0206422018349 0.026700313972 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.121559633028 0.113004496875 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0321100917431 0.0255425247493 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00688073394495 0.0127820249294 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2234.0 2731.13054187 82% => OK
No of words: 404.0 446.07635468 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5297029703 6.12365571057 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.57801047555 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.274752475248 0.378187486979 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20297029703 0.287650121315 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116336633663 0.208842608468 56% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0841584158416 0.135150697306 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42969974259 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 207.018472906 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.378712871287 0.469332199767 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.0192845145 52.1807786196 77% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.039408867 105% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2380952381 23.2022227129 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0100403119 57.7814097925 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.380952381 141.986410481 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 23.2022227129 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.190476190476 0.724660767414 26% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.58251231527 140% => OK
Readability: 39.5351249411 51.9672348444 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.87628865979 1.8405768891 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395185992606 0.441005458295 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163937891154 0.135418324435 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0824734652245 0.0829849096947 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.62126921938 0.58762219726 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145655604912 0.147661913831 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181715923159 0.193483328276 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789163738574 0.0970749176394 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.480566849176 0.42659136922 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109231258766 0.0774707102158 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272384125409 0.312017818177 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980025138953 0.0698173142475 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.33743842365 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 6.46551724138 124% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 14.657635468 102% => OK
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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