Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
Mandating that the advertising contracts have been cancel due to broadcasting of weather and local news on a particular channel is truely false. It has many reason underlying among the channel's administrative pannel. So truly inclination among the wrong timming of broadcasting the wheather and local news is flawless.
Due to recent nation wide recession among the small and medium enterprise enterprenur choose to not to advertise thier product among the particular channel making thier business loss and recession proof. Various bussiness holders choose the print media advertisement rather than electronic media due to large availability and presence of print media among particular region making bussiness more advertise among the pupil of specific teritory.
Recent shortfall in viewership of wheather and local news is due to misrepresentaion of graphics of particular show aired on channel and naive news anchor making the show mundane and particulary boring among the other ones. So its in interest of administrative panel of news channel to make particular changes in overall production house wheather it is news anchor or post production staff. This all Stuffs may regenerate more viewership among the couple of previous months generating more revenue from advertiser.
Shortfall In the viewership of Channel can be due to mundane regular programs and absence of special weekly programs that are aired on competittive news channel. So in order to evoke the viewership higher authorities should take specific moves among the above said statement that boost ups its viewership. Many Special debate should be aired among various nationl issues that make channel more aggresive among the viewership that can help to boost the advertisement revenue.
Thus in above all the situation among the current issues flickering over the profit sheet of advertising revenue above stated guidelines should be luminious over the administraive heads.
Comments
e-rater score report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 19 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 298 350
No. of Characters: 1631 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.155 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.473 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.887 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.163 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.433 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.694 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'canceled', 'cancelled'.
Suggestion: canceled; cancelled
...hat the advertising contracts have been cancel due to broadcasting of weather and loca...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...ocal news is flawless. Due to recent nation wide recession among the small and medium en...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...int media among particular region making bussiness more advertise among the pupil...
^^
Line 7, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elp to boost the advertisement revenue. Thus in above all the situation among th...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...boost the advertisement revenue. Thus in above all the situation among the cu...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uminious over the administraive heads.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 298.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57718120805 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90710181024 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506711409396 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8190221313 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 23.324526521 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.70786347227 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108991251624 0.218282227539 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516397092031 0.0743258471296 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042378401723 0.0701772020484 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684637996345 0.128457276422 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047687682487 0.0628817314937 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.3799401198 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.3550499002 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.5979740519 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32208582834 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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