In the preceding argument, the author claims that the North Americans residents ought to eat soy due to presence a substance called Isoflavones that will preclude the depression and the fatigue feeling. The conclusion of the argument is based on the premises. Firstly, the author citing a study indicates that the Northen's complain from fatigue 9 times and 31 times suffer from incurable depression compering with the Asian's. Secondly, the author mentions that the Asian's eat around 20 grams of Soy per day, whereas the Northen's do not consume any. Finally, the author states a fact that Soy contains Phytochemicals called Isoflavones that help in diseases resisting. Hence, the first glance it may seem plausible. However, careful scrutiny sheds light on the plethora of assumptions that could undermine the evaluation of the argument.
First of all, the argument readily states a study describing the Northern's complaining from fatigue 9 times and depression 31 times compering with the Asian's. Thus, this study should be aborted because the author fails to provide sufficient detailed information about myriad of things. Such as, the sample size, is it representative and acceptable for generalization on the whole area.Moreover, what kind of information on they study. For example, it may 10 pages with 2 questions about the argument topic. Lastly, the author fails to compare to countries with each others and draw a result upon it.
Second of all, the argument could much clearer if it provided more information about the Asian's lifestyle, culture, eating habits, their diseases and health status. Furthermore, how the author concludes the Asian's Soy consumption and compering it with zero eating for the Northern's. Simply, the Soy might grow in the Asia due to profitable conditions is not available in the North America.
Third of all, even though there is a positive and concrete correlation between eating Soy and the effect of the chemical on resisting disease. This does not necessarily indicate the conspicuous relation between the two events. Hence, it is worthwhile to indicates that fatigue and depression are not a physical diseases. For instance, to cure from them it better to take a rest, go shopping or going to calm area away from the hustle and bustle of the down town life. So, to figure out the germane causes a thorough investigation considering the leverage of all possible contributors is expected.
In conclusion, the argument fails to mention one of the key factors, on basis of which it could to evaluated. Namely, the relation between eating Soy and its effect on the humankind's depression and fatigue was equivocal. So, without complete information, the argument unsubstantiated and open to debate.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 441 350
No. of Characters: 2244 1500
No. of Different Words: 230 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.583 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.088 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.822 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 174 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 131 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 97 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.05 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.865 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.51 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.036 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ning from fatigue 9 times and depression 31 times compering with the Asians. Thus...
^^
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...le for generalization on the whole area.Moreover, what kind of information on they study...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 312, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disease'?
Suggestion: disease
...tigue and depression are not a physical diseases. For instance, to cure from them it bet...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 357, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...ses. For instance, to cure from them it better to take a rest, go shopping or going to...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 55.5748502994 112% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 440.0 441.139720559 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24090909091 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89607885377 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 204.123752495 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 705.55239521 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.76447105788 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6281059768 57.8364921388 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.260869565 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1304347826 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.95652173913 5.70786347227 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.88822355289 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178422879289 0.218282227539 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456505594447 0.0743258471296 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591500611074 0.0701772020484 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932558514022 0.128457276422 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487847554892 0.0628817314937 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 98.500998004 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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