Slimville city residents have adopted healthier lifestyles. A recent survey of city residents shows that their exercise habits confirms more closely to what doctors and health practitioners recommend than they did seven years ago. During those seven years, more people have been taking daily walks than ever before. Although a few gymnasium complex in city have been closed down, the other sport complex and gymnasiums see full attendances in some seasons. Because of these positive changes in the exercising habits of slimville city residents, we predict that obesity rate of the city will soon below the national average.
The argument stated by the author sounds to convincing at first. But on closely analyzing the reasons and the basis on which the author has based his argument upon, it seems that there are a few assumptions that have been made by the author. These assumptions need to be taken into consideration and only then can we make a justifiable statement regarding the obesity rate.
Firstly, the author mentions that a survey was conducted recently through which it was found that the city residents have been working out according to what the doctors recommend. This statement does not tell us to what extent do the residents follow the the exercises given by the health practitioners. It just says that nowadays the workouts align closely to what they did long back. Also, there is no information regarding the residents who were involved in the survey. What if these people have just participated and have deceived the survey takers to appear health conscious.
Furthermore, there are more city residents taking daily walks than ever before. This does not depict in any way that the obesity rate will reduce. What if the population of the city might have increases during the past seven years. If there are a huge amount of people who have moved in to the city then this might be one of the reasons why there are more people walking daily. There old city residents might still not want to indulge in such health practices.
It is said that a few gyms have closed while the others are working. This first of all shows that the residents have opted to not go to the gyms and rather do something else as a workout or not do anything. Not working out weakens the argument stated by the author. Also, only a few gyms and sports complexes are full at some time of the year. This may during the times when most residents are free and may be willing to take part in these sports programs or workout in the gyms just for the time being. It is nowhere mentioned that these gyms are full throughout year or anything which supports the argument.
Thus, after considering all the above assumptions, it is clear that the author's statement can be refuted due to many reasons. In order to make a statement about the obesity rate and the health of the city residents, the author must look profoundly into these assumptions and must make a statement after they have been dealt with.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... to what extent do the residents follow the the exercises given by the health practitio...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... to what extent do the residents follow the the exercises given by the health practitio...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...e past seven years. If there are a huge amount of people who have moved in to the city...
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Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...above assumptions, it is clear that the authors statement can be refuted due to many re...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, so, still, then, thus, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 418.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67464114833 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42234774445 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478468899522 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6374591508 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0476190476 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.70786347227 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275197228796 0.218282227539 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786064737208 0.0743258471296 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064463689175 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138770145591 0.128457276422 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996224936101 0.0628817314937 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.3799401198 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... to what extent do the residents follow the the exercises given by the health practitio...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... to what extent do the residents follow the the exercises given by the health practitio...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...e past seven years. If there are a huge amount of people who have moved in to the city...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...above assumptions, it is clear that the authors statement can be refuted due to many re...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, so, still, then, thus, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 418.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67464114833 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42234774445 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478468899522 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6374591508 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0476190476 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.70786347227 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275197228796 0.218282227539 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786064737208 0.0743258471296 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064463689175 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138770145591 0.128457276422 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996224936101 0.0628817314937 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.3799401198 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.