In a study of the reading habits of Waymarsh citizens conducted by the University of Waymarsh, most respondents said that they preferred literary classics as reading material. However, a second study conducted by the same researchers found that the type of book most frequently checked out of each of the public libraries in Waymarsh was the mystery novel. Therefore, it can be concluded that the respondents in the first study had misrepresented their reading habits.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
It is stated in the passage that, according to first study reading habit of Waymarsh Citizen is literary classic but another study shows that their reading habit is mystery novel. So study which was carried out for the first time misrepresented their reading habits. However before jumping to conclusion some question must be answer.
To begin with, when was the first study conducted? Or how much time difference is between first study and second study? Maybe there was a huge gap between two studies which may have change the overview of the Waymarsh Citizen over reading habit. If this is true then it is blatant that result of two studies conducted over their reading habit will differ. Maybe, Citizen must have got bored with same type of content over a time and when they change their reading habit that time second study was conduct in this case it is plausible to see two different results of two different studies conducted. If this happens to be true then conclusion drawn is dubious and does not hold any water.
Moreover, how many people were included in first survey and second survey? Or what was the population of that city when first survey was conducted? Maybe in first surveys many people were not considered as compare to second survey or vice versa. If this is true then it’s blatant that result will differ and study on both surveys will be incorrect. Maybe population of that city when first study was conducted was less and many literary classic lovers were their but as the population burgeon many mystery lovers increases which change the rating in second study. If this happens to be true then conclusion drawn in the passage seems to be attenuate and it can be benighted.
Finally, what is the possibility that second study result is accurate or correct? Maybe first study result is more accurate then the second study result. If this is true then it is not apt to say that first study results were misrepresented. People may not have bolster to study which was carried out at the second time which may have change the result. If this happens to be true then conclusion drawn is false and not apt.
In conclusion, evidence provided by the arguer, that support his claim, are dubious as well as erroneous. If all the questions are answer and more evidences are provided then it will strengthen the argument.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 405 350
No. of Characters: 1895 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.486 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.679 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.251 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.409 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.072 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.539 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...me misrepresented their reading habits. However before jumping to conclusion some quest...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he Waymarsh Citizen over reading habit. If this is true then it is blatant that re...
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Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is dubious and does not hold any water. Moreover, how many people were included ...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ybe first study result is more accurate then the second study result. If this is tru...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... accurate then the second study result. If this is true then it is not apt to say ...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bolstered'.
Suggestion: bolstered
...ere misrepresented. People may not have bolster to study which was carried out at the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.6327345309 194% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 13.6137724551 140% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 405.0 441.139720559 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8024691358 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33189713459 2.78398813304 84% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.397530864198 0.468620217663 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.991295132 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4090909091 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.70786347227 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275085442492 0.218282227539 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09456414844 0.0743258471296 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923983288344 0.0701772020484 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161685227526 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120198360888 0.0628817314937 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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