A tv station's business manager proposes to increase time of local news and weather news in late night news for some reasons.

Essay topics:

A tv station's business manager proposes to increase time of local news and weather news in late night news for some reasons.

As per the manager of a television station that when they lessen the time of weather and local news and increased the time of national news than it create loss in the business but manager didn't tell the previous review of the television and the local businesses got some new television station to advertise their news.

The television station manager saying that people complaining about the weather and local news coverage than they are concerned but didn't specify the concerned.In my opinion what if people concerned about the quality of the news coverage or they don't like the anchors voice and what if people complain about the advertise that shown on tv is misleading them to buy fake products.

local news that advertise local business but what if they are selling fake products or they are misleading people for the greed and suddenly people got to know about the products so they're canceling their contract.what if local business man got good deal from different tv station in less money so they canceled the contract.

At the end television manger saying about the increase in time of national news creat all this than it is not convincing because people complains is not specified and maybe local business canceling their contract for the other good deal.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.9520958084 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 55.5748502994 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 2260.96107784 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 214.0 441.139720559 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02803738318 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48070992659 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 204.123752495 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476635514019 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 705.55239521 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.8473053892 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7167378683 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 269.0 119.503703932 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5 23.324526521 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.70786347227 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352693970444 0.218282227539 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242616835483 0.0743258471296 326% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113880013553 0.0701772020484 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242616835483 0.128457276422 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113880013553 0.0628817314937 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 14.3799401198 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.3550499002 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.197005988 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 98.500998004 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 12.3882235529 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.1389221557 208% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.9071856287 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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