two years ago, radio station WCQP in rockville decided to increase the number of call in advice programs that it broadcast; since that time, it's share of the radio audience in the rockville listening area has increased significantly. Given WCQP's recent success with call in programming, and citing a nationwide survey indicating that many radio listeners are quite interested iun such programs, the station manager of KICK in medway recommends that KICK include more call in advice programs in an attempt to gain a larger audience share in listening area.
Firstly, it can be state from the statement that the numbers of listeners have been increased. but it is not stated that by how much amount it has been increased. the decision tp increase the listeners was taken two years ago by WCQP radio station in rockville. WCQP radio station decided to increase the call in advice programmers in attempt to gain larger audience.
As the radio talks are broadcasted everywhere so that the talks you do on radio can be heard by everyone. This leads to dissolution of privacy of one's personal life. Also the radio jockeys make false announcement that, they can help you if you are in some problems. By coming under influence, a person shares his personal life talks over the radio which can dangerous as it can easily misuse. Also by taking one's opinion in personal life can leads to more problems. As the person you are consulting is not aware about your situation. By listening to a incomplete story he gives opinion about your problem.
The second flaw is that, the number of listener are to be increase by what amount. Also the survey that shows that radio listeners are quite interested in call in programs might be wrong. It might be possible, that the people they have asked only they like the call in program. while other feel irritation in listening to music. This can also causes to reduce in radio listener. If the radio channel doesn't play music then the listener might not love to listen the music channel.
Thirdly, the radio jockey which are giving solution to the call in customers can harm someone by their given advice. if some person reacts according the advice given by the radio jockey and it creates more complicated issues then before. Then the listener can get in more problem. If someone takes any illegal activities, then the radio jockey might be responsible for giving the advice.
By seeing the rise in listener of WCQP radio channel, the manager of KICK in medway recommended to include more call in program. But, by this move kick can spoil its reputation in front of listener. Instead of copying the ideas of other radio channel one should develop his own idea.
To put it in a nutshell, it can be concluded that the statement weak as it has many flaws. As the data was two years ago, by the current time the numbers of listeners might get reduced. so this statement can't be followed by the other companies.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 421 350
No. of Characters: 1917 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.53 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.553 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.312 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.136 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.231 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...mbers of listeners have been increased. but it is not stated that by how much amoun...
^^^
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... how much amount it has been increased. the decision tp increase the listeners was ...
^^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ution of privacy of ones personal life. Also the radio jockeys make false announceme...
^^^^
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... can dangerous as it can easily misuse. Also by taking ones opinion in personal life...
^^^^
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...aking ones opinion in personal life can leads to more problems. As the person you are...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rsonal life can leads to more problems. As the person you are consulting is not aw...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e about your situation. By listening to a incomplete story he gives opinion about...
^
Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ener are to be increase by what amount. Also the survey that shows that radio listen...
^^^^
Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ked only they like the call in program. while other feel irritation in listening to m...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ked only they like the call in program. while other feel irritation in listening to m...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 344, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...on in listening to music. This can also causes to reduce in radio listener. If the rad...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 351, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reducing
...istening to music. This can also causes to reduce in radio listener. If the radio channel...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lso causes to reduce in radio listener. If the radio channel doesnt play music the...
^^
Line 9, column 401, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...in radio listener. If the radio channel doesnt play music then the listener might not ...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...can harm someone by their given advice. if some person reacts according the advice...
^^
Line 13, column 226, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
... and it creates more complicated issues then before. Then the listener can get in mo...
^^^^
Line 17, column 85, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended including'.
Suggestion: recommended including
... channel, the manager of KICK in medway recommended to include more call in program. But, by this move...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...numbers of listeners might get reduced. so this statement cant be followed by the ...
^^
Line 21, column 205, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rs might get reduced. so this statement cant be followed by the other companies.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 2260.96107784 88% => OK
No of words: 420.0 441.139720559 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4113523553 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469047619048 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 19.7664670659 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6299198868 57.8364921388 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3703703704 119.503703932 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 23.324526521 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.59259259259 5.70786347227 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272657213045 0.218282227539 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783872820144 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874573739642 0.0701772020484 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151667163896 0.128457276422 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855098469841 0.0628817314937 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.3799401198 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.3550499002 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.197005988 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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