Two years ago, the town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel.
During the past two years, tourism in Ocean View has increased, new businesses have
opened there, and Ocean View's tax revenues have risen by 30 percent. The best way to
improve Hopewell's economy, and generate additional tax revenues, is to build a golf course
and resort hotel similar to those in Ocean View.
The author proposed that to increase the revenue in the Hopewell to build the golf course and resort hotel. However, the statement contains some flaws and will not be accepted if it fails to answer some critical flaws. Moreover, the assumption will draw an accurate conclusion and reject the untruth assumption.
Firstly, the meyor is totally confused with the growth of the city and just building the golf course and resort will increase the revenue is unjustified. Moreover, the tourism is increased for only two years than how Meyaor can be confirmed that the golf course and resort increase the economic. Moreover, the city of the Ocean View may have different tourist post and natural beauty is attractive and that's why new business is open this city. But, the statement does not contain any of the issues.
The second problematic isuue is Mayor did not take any issue to increase tourism and not taken any long term project. Moreover, new business will open if the place is attracted by the businessman and more tourist are come to the place. But, the Mayor did not account the development of the city, tourism place or to build the new places that will attract the tourist.
The third issue is large number of building the golf course and resort is a long term process and many issues relate to the cost. But, the Mayor did not account any of the issues. Moreover, t
While overall hypotesis is quite interesting but required more information to validate the proposal. Moreover, the proposal will be validated only if the already referred weakness is removed and answer all the question accurately.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 274 350
No. of Characters: 1303 1500
No. of Different Words: 133 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.069 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.755 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.367 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.267 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.816 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.933 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...golf course and resort will increase the revenue is unjustified. Moreover, the to...
^^
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an be confirmed that the golf course and resort increase the economic. Moreover, ...
^^
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...urse and resort increase the economic. Moreover, the city of the Ocean View may have di...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...st and natural beauty is attractive and thats why new business is open this city. But...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t taken any long term project. Moreover, new business will open if the place is a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 28.8173652695 17% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 55.5748502994 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 2260.96107784 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 274.0 441.139720559 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91240875912 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45511684039 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510948905109 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0139423384 57.8364921388 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.1428571429 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 23.324526521 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.70786347227 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161109954855 0.218282227539 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516760780416 0.0743258471296 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607487105099 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794060929735 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768477059818 0.0628817314937 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.3799401198 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 98.500998004 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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