Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
In the above argument, author seems to be questionable about the uniqueness of the distinctive pattern woven baskets found in prehistoric village of Palea. As the author traveled he realized that the similar design baskets are available in distinct parts the world. Even the villages in different corners of the world also use similar style baskets. The overall mindset and the assumption of the author is very fluctuating and right from the beginning is vague and illogical. He has not covered every aspects of the situation and has not collected enough statistics while making a conclusion about it.
Firstly, seeing woven baskets in the close proximity of a village he made a conclusion that the baskets are being developed inside the village itself by the village residents. For ages people are known to make things in which they are specialized and then sharing their specialization with others by exporting things to others out in the world. People are known to import products if they don't have enough resources to build the things of classic quality. Sometimes manpower and resources work are also the barrier for this step. So, might be the villagers of Palea had these baskets imported from the nearby states.
Even if we consider the saying of author right that the baskets are made in the Palea city, citizens might have decided to
transport it to different parts of the world to extend their business horizon. They might have looked as the reasonable source of profit for the betterment of the village and the coming future generation.
In his next statement author seems obscure by stating the facts that the archaeologist has found similar baskets in Lithos, a village across the deep and broad Brim River from Palea. Since, Lithos is only reachable via boat to cross the Brim River and the author doesn't find any evidences of the existence of boats in Palea, he again changed his statement that the baskets where not uniquely Palean. Here also author failed to have a wider outlook at the point, as the villagers might had boats in ancient time but then sold that boats out or used that boat to travel outside of the city or boats are all destroyed.
Therefore, it might be plausible that the baskets are exported to a different state from Palea and then from there distributed to different cities. So, Palea must have used different two or four wheeler to deliver baskets out of the city.
It then can be interpreted that the baskets are the unique production of the Palea city widely known for there distinctive pattern designs.
Henceforth, author must have widen been more proactive in collecting more realistic and relevant information in supporting his point of view. He might have considered inquired about the people from that city about the woven baskets, about the transportation mechanism they use, about the business used by them for living and many more queries learning more about city before making any conclusions. He should not have hurried but should have made provided with sound reasons to believe upon.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 514 350
No. of Characters: 2488 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.761 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.84 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.475 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 171 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 124 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.476 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.738 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.573 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... found in prehistoric village of Palea. As the author traveled he realized that th...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
... Firstly, seeing woven baskets in the close proximity of a village he made a conclusion that ...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...le are known to import products if they dont have enough resources to build the thin...
^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lea city, citizens might have decided to transport it to different parts of the w...
^^^
Line 8, column 264, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... to cross the Brim River and the author doesnt find any evidences of the existence of ...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 196, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
...ea must have used different two or four wheeler to deliver baskets out of the city. I...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 30, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...esigns. Henceforth, author must have widen been more proactive in collecting more ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 55.5748502994 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2546.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 512.0 441.139720559 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97265625 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51137244891 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 204.123752495 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46484375 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 794.7 705.55239521 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0874549278 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.238095238 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.380952381 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.70786347227 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 5.15768463074 155% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.67664670659 278% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225923381407 0.218282227539 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707818568452 0.0743258471296 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537537903496 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105141868169 0.128457276422 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206206062192 0.0628817314937 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 98.500998004 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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