Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa

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Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.

Palea was the only village that manufactured woven baskets, which were not found in any other area. However, the author has claimed that the baskets are not actually unique, as some archeologists found that baskets in lithos. The assumptions like lack of means of transportation, non existence of palean boats and considering boats as only way to cross river, which the author has made to justify the conclusions, are not up to the mark.
The first assumption that the author has made is about the Brim River's deepness and broadness, it is not proven that, river was this much deep and broad, as it is in present. Paleans could have crossed the river easily and had the exchange of things. So this assumption that author has made is totally inappropriate to lead to the definite conclusion.
Secondly, Author has mentioned about the palean boats that were not found in lithos. It is not at all cogent to assume about presence of palean boats. The Author has made an irrerelevant assumption by taking palean boats into consideration. Taking into account the previous assumption, if the river was not this broad, Paleans would not even use the boats to cross the river. This weakens the assumption made by the author that the boats were the only medium of transportation.
However, it is possible that people of lithos, who might have gone to lithos for some purpose, and found baskets interesting, so they took it with them. Thus the claim done by the author about uniqueness of baskets is totally baseless. Finding Baskets in Lithos nowhere concludes that the baskets are made in Lithos itself and baskets did not lose its uniqueness , as they were manufactured in palea.
Hence, the conclusion that the author has drawn from the unjustified assumptions, is not appropriate, and it contains many flaws which restrain to rely upon the conclusion.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and baskets did not lose its uniqueness , as they were manufactured in palea. He...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224783861671 0.25644967241 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.190201729107 0.15541462614 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0778097982709 0.0836205057962 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0576368876081 0.0520304965353 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0317002881844 0.0272364105082 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132564841499 0.125424944231 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0547550432277 0.0416121511921 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71421499128 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0259365994236 0.026700313972 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112391930836 0.113004496875 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00864553314121 0.0255425247493 34% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172910662824 0.0127820249294 135% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1850.0 2731.13054187 68% => OK
No of words: 313.0 446.07635468 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91054313099 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.57801047555 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325878594249 0.378187486979 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220447284345 0.287650121315 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143769968051 0.208842608468 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0990415335463 0.135150697306 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71421499128 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 207.018472906 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4696485623 0.469332199767 100% => OK
Word variations: 46.5029325194 52.1807786196 89% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.039408867 75% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8666666667 23.2022227129 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5957744383 57.7814097925 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 141.986410481 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 23.2022227129 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.724660767414 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.58251231527 84% => OK
Readability: 42.9113951012 51.9672348444 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.47422680412 1.8405768891 80% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394822859712 0.441005458295 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147653792453 0.135418324435 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0758473799461 0.0829849096947 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.629791967626 0.58762219726 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155599772943 0.147661913831 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192389704682 0.193483328276 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709225318753 0.0970749176394 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.347497544914 0.42659136922 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120967688033 0.0774707102158 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270599657999 0.312017818177 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06377606139 0.0698173142475 91% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.82512315271 187% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.82389162562 212% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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