All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the posit

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All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
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I disagree with the statement. College and university students would get benefit from study no matter whether that college is national or international. So, it is difficult to generalized the statement by saying that student could do better if they will study in foreign.

Every country has different grades of colleges some are very good and some are normal. Likewise, students also have different grades. So, here students benefit matters on the fact that in which college they are studying. Similarly, countries also have grades ex-higher study in the USA is better than in India in terms of equipment, funds and research pattern however secondary and higher secondary school teaching is better in India than in the USA. Indian student is going for higher study rather than higher secondary in the USA would be beneficial. Thus, it is very important that a student belongs to which country and for what kind of study he/she is going to foreign country.

Sometime we may say that this statement is correct ex- if a particular country has not good facility or faculty for any subject, in this case students would get benefit for spending at-least one semester in a foreign university having specialist of that particular subject. Apart from this we have few more examples-if students are doing research on a foreign literature or sometime on a foreign economy, they should visit that country so that they can understand the literature or economy of that country.

In summary, a student can do better things and achieve any position if they will study properly. Necessity of going foreign country is based on a student nationalism and a course he/she want to study. There are few examples such as study on foreign language and economy where a student required to go foreign country.

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Sentence: So, it is difficult to generalized the statement by saying that student could do better if they will study in foreign.
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Sentence: Necessity of going foreign country is based on a student nationalism and a course he/she want to study.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, past tense

Sentence: Apart from this we have few more examples-if students are doing research on a foreign literature or sometime on a foreign economy, they should visit that country so that they can understand the literature or economy of that country.
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